The Guides
New sentences How far and cold the moon and stars but in the ebony darkness they show the wandering man a place or way to go have fun with that one LOL Bear
THE GUIDES
A life time ago and far away in the ebony darkness -
hovering on invisible threads, that silver orb, mini spheres -
all occupying a space in that great place of starkness
that can freeze the hearts and souls of man and his peers.
Yet this silver orb and it's companion spheres guide
mans romantic heart and his spirit on a long ride
across the land of love, the lands of this planet,
the oceans deep as he wanders hoping to get
to the place - to know which is the right way to go
and what life is all about and how it is to show
all of man kind how to find the adventurer in
himself and to fore go what has been many a mans sin.
The lethargic, lifeless, languishing, sleeping man
who sits on his ass, life passing him by doing nothing he can
to light the fires, lift the spirits, sing - the flames to fan
into a blazing inferno of soul delight lighting the skies
that might fill men's hearts, spirit, soul and his eyes
so that this earth, man kind no longer cries
for all they feel - believes dies.
All Life is a force !
It will take it's coarse !
B.J."A" 2
April 10th 2009
though you would have a tough time with the sentence i wrote to you but you came through like a champion your," the guides" is extremly well done It seems thats the words you write just roll from your mind to the paper, good one WJA2
Copyright © William J. Jr. Atfield | Year Posted 2012
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