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The Grown Up Test

If you want to give your children the best chance to grow up, Become independent, And become functioning members of Society, This is what you need to tell them. It is no longer about us, Or the mistakes we have made, It is your turn to hold the batten, To move out of our shadow, And take the next part of your life journey, With you in control, Whether it be close to us, Or far away. We have taught you all we can, Our mistakes cannot be undone, Our job is done, Though you we will never shun. So, go, And find some greener grass, Go and reclaim your sense of wonder, The time for blame is now past. Make sure you nail that to the mast, Of every ship you sail in.

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Date: 4/18/2021 11:46:00 AM
Handing over the torch to the future ...
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David Smith
Date: 4/18/2021 10:38:00 PM
Yes indeed. Hopefully with a little wisdom to go with it. Thank you so much for taking time to read. Best regards David in NZ
Date: 4/12/2021 8:29:00 PM
I agree. We teach them all we can and then we must trust they will make the right choices. There are bound to be mistakes to learn from, but children need to stop blaming their parents for their bad behavior when they become adults. Great wisdom in your words David! I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo
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David Smith
Date: 4/13/2021 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Connie. Our two eldest girls carried more load around the house than our son. It was a bone of contention between me and my wife but since our son wet away to University in Auckland with nobody to do everything for him, he has grown up heaps and is now a fair cook and a bit of a handy person which has got him other part time work as he only works part tie in the field he Qualified in. It is a sign of the future I think for many. Making a living from several different jobs. We are all well here Thanks David in NZ
Date: 4/9/2021 7:48:00 PM
Marvelous writing, David. Direct and purposeful. Thanks for sharing this. I loved the final lines most of all.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/10/2021 7:54:00 AM
Hope you're having a wonderful day in NZ, David. It's a beautiful day here in ol' Kentucky! Keep writing!!!
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David Smith
Date: 4/9/2021 10:18:00 PM
I am glad you liked it. I thought the substance of message was sound. I am still learning about poetry category's but felt I was close enough with Carpe Diem as the theme is about getting the young adults to seize the day and take charge of their own destiny. It is also about encouraging parents to hand over the helm. Not so easy but seeing them fly solo is worth it. Thanks again for your comments. Hope you keep posting your work to share with us. Take care David in NZ

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