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The Growing Darkness

My last reflection of the past holds little hope for me, like weightless feathers it floats slowly from my mind. Darkness fills each lost moment with lonely memories, waiting to engulf each hollowed void it leaves behind. With the same lines I've planted again and again, I farm the seeds of my stale imagination. My body remains, but my mind is now fallow, sprouting worn words reaped from fields of desperation. Black is the soil from which grow these broken verses devoid of life's magic, no heart or devotion. My graceful fairy princess fades from my vision, where once she loved me with impassioned emotion. Now nothing of substance weeps warm from my soul no desire, no beauty, no sweet love or passion only ice covered metaphors and rotting rhymes. My sightless eyes, blind, to all, but the light of contrition. 05/30/16

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Date: 6/11/2016 2:45:00 AM
Oh wow I agree with Teddy this is an amazing piece xx
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James Inman
Date: 6/11/2016 7:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Mandy.
Date: 6/9/2016 10:25:00 AM
Congrats James, for your placement with this amazing piece!! ;-)
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James Inman
Date: 6/11/2016 7:40:00 PM
Thank you Teddy.
Date: 6/9/2016 12:46:00 AM
BIG congrats, I just knew it had to be on the winner list.
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James Inman
Date: 6/9/2016 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 6/9/2016 12:41:00 AM
The hearts cry for apology and atonement ... and the never-ending hunt for adequate words to say what's in your soul. You wrote this poem with intelligence and depth. Thanks for entering my contest! Check out my blog, if you ever get the chance, and tell me about your poem :)
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James Inman
Date: 6/9/2016 5:52:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy, for hosting the contest. I enjoyed writing for it. See you on your blog.
Date: 6/2/2016 8:24:00 PM
OMG, it's FANTASTIC what you got with your five words, and SAD, Ralph!! Almost the opposite of what i got with MINE. I love this one. BIG SEVEN!!
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Date: 5/31/2016 3:16:00 AM
this was superb James, great use of the five words, the best of luck in the contest:)... ~Linda~
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James Inman
Date: 5/31/2016 6:43:00 AM
Hi PD. It is nice to hear from you. Thank you for the wonderful comment.
Date: 5/30/2016 9:28:00 AM
you wove the words in so beautifully into such a sad deep quatrian James :-( Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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James Inman
Date: 5/30/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Jan.

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