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The Grieving

The Grieving A frenzy, a chaos of celebration all around. Togetherness and ritual imposed while inside of me a splintering No respite, no escape from faces eager to connect to share, to love. Grief is a mongrel here; an agony of burden on the righteous shoulders of joy I can only run, crying out, in frantic search of This tree, this breeze that gives me permission gives me space to breathe to be Its tapestry of lace against a grey ocean of sky shrouds me from expectation, from judgement, defending my right to grieve to peace At Christmas

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Date: 2/28/2024 5:59:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:52:00 PM
:) ENJOYING A SECOND TIME. LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2014 6:27:00 PM
You have captured grief well here. A strong start to your Poetry Soup experience. May 2015 bring you many smiles.
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Date: 12/26/2014 5:16:00 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup, Victoria :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/25/2014 9:13:00 PM
Victoria , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/25/2014 7:21:00 AM
Very sad write , Merry Christmas, Victoria
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