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The Grey Is Thundering

(30/11/2013) It was only white and blue in the sky Then the soft grey starting to replace the white Over the wind, the blue shooed by Sun is glad, at home relaxing with the bright The then-soft-grey is darker now White and blue have given their bow Again, dark grey has won Has pulled curtain on the sun Bluffed and kicked colors to be gone The thunder is roaring to celebrate Feeling sad, the rain is pouring its cry Darkest shade of grey, Rambling in thundering to sing its victory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/28/2014 3:24:00 PM
DINDA, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
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Date: 1/14/2014 12:12:00 PM
dazzling piece,didnda.. special congrats to you..huggs
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:46:00 AM
Reading this one again.... Sounds like my life right now... The gray is always winning... luv~ Linda
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 1/14/2014 11:59:00 AM
i dont believe it. how can grey defeat a warm soul, which who u are? :p
Date: 1/5/2014 3:07:00 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win, Dinda
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Date: 1/3/2014 9:57:00 PM
Dinda, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. Stop by and read my latest when you have time, I will miss you:( have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
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Date: 12/28/2013 3:53:00 PM
Dinda a very colourful write …I like it a lot…david
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 1/4/2014 11:47:00 PM
thank you, David dear. have a prosperous and healthy 2014 :)
Date: 12/24/2013 3:33:00 AM
Dinda--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:07:00 AM
Hi Dinda I like this poem and the metaphoric expression that you have used. This piece has an element of irony too. Nice work.
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:55:00 PM
Dear Dinda, this is fantastic poetry from you. Is this for the color of sound contest.? If not, it would sure work well in that one. VERY nice!
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:06:00 PM
Dear poet, Dinda I was happy last week to hear from you. but, wow! thanks a million for adding my twisted little poetic mind on your favorite list. I enjoyed the deeper side of the imagery here, glad victory will have a voice. by the way, I tried adding you on my list. Lol, red letters appeared saying you're already on my list. then I remembered of course you are, I remember you're one of the first poets who stopped by many times in the past. have a nice one-Skat
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Date: 11/30/2013 8:32:00 PM
but a temporary victory nice poem
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Date: 11/30/2013 12:39:00 PM
- After the thunder comes the sun .... lovely written Dinda. - Have a happy weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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