Get Your Premium Membership

The Green Bench

Hidden past the highway bend, a bench clings to a shallow cliff above a beach where banks extend across the bay in sandy drifts. When tides are low, the sea withdraws, to flaunt the treasured ocean floor, and anyone can walk across the sand to reach the other shore. With green paint peeling like old flesh, the bench is baked in salt and sun. Remember when the paint was fresh, and in your arms I came undone? From here, we watch the water snag in grooves of sand like buried mirrors. The sky is pink as sunlight fades. Come close, my love, I need you nearer. *This poem is based on the green bench (yes, it really exists!) at Sand Dollar Beach, located in the Rose Bay area of Nova Scotia, Canada

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 4/5/2013 7:31:00 PM
Heather, Congratulations in Francine's, contest.. nice "Wearing of the Green" entry. always~ Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2013 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this win gain Heather...
Login to Reply
Date: 4/3/2013 1:00:00 PM
The images you so wonderfully wrote, makes us all want to visit your green bench. Awesome write and win! Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 4/2/2013 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on a really great love story here! I like them like I like my steaks, not over done, but tender and sweet! RAY
Login to Reply
Date: 4/2/2013 6:37:00 AM
Congrats, Heather!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/1/2013 11:19:00 PM
congrats on your win Heather, great entry
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2013 5:28:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2013 4:49:00 PM
yours was one of my very favorites in this contest. how good to see it rated high. Congrats, my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2013 9:21:00 AM
Well Heather, this one makes me want to visit Nova Scotia for sure...I am an absolute ocean freak and you have made me homesick for the sea...Exquisite and near flawless poetry...You're pretty good you know?...Congratulations! - Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2013 10:12:00 PM
Hi Heather, this is awesome...Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2013 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win heather love xx
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2013 7:57:00 PM
Swoon! A wonderful, romantic poem. congrats. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2013 4:56:00 PM
Loved it just as much the second time Heather .. Donna, congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2013 2:22:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Heather! We all have those special places, don't we? Congratulations on your fine win!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2013 1:21:00 PM
This is wonderful Heather. I would have put it no. 1. Congratulations and thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2013 11:30:00 AM
Congrats Heather!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/18/2013 9:35:00 AM
Beautifully written... Very interesting place to see... I'm sure.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/17/2013 9:13:00 PM
Wow, what a beautifully flowing well written poem. This will go in my favorites.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/17/2013 10:19:00 AM
beautiful write, Heather. Thanks - loved the contest : )
Login to Reply
Date: 3/17/2013 7:26:00 AM
Heather, this is just haunting in its beauty. I don't think luck is an issue with this one! Donna
Login to Reply
Date: 3/15/2013 4:46:00 PM
HOW COOL is this??? If I were Susan, it would be top of my list. It's so beautiful And gosh you could even use it for a green contest. haha. Love it.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/15/2013 12:51:00 PM
Heather this is a stunning piece with a wonderful image...David
Login to Reply
Date: 3/15/2013 10:16:00 AM
I am sure that watching the beach in Nova Scotia is a wonderful view. You have done a brilliant job of capturing a picture of this beauty. Eloquent words; I like the meter you have chosen for this one.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2013 2:21:00 PM
Hey this is great. Perfect rhyme. I am glad you stopped at my poetry so that I found you. As to my poem yes it is for the contest and thank you for your kind words. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2013 2:15:00 PM
Now I want to take a trip to Nova Scotia. "in grooves of sand like buried mirrors." is my favorite line. I like how your mind works.
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things