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The Greater Good

On high in blue and epic flight, a swoop, then upward soar again, all through the day and into night, the guardian of my fellow men. I'm unaware of whom I'll kill, nor sentient of the souls below who scramble 'neath outcrop or hill, and huddle, be I friend or foe? No order, nor the call to arms compelled my journey to the skies, an instant urge, bereft of qualms, drove me to question truth from lies and challenge my mortality. To vie for human brotherhood, the measure of eternity, the struggle for the greater good.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/3/2016 10:11:00 AM
How wonderful will be the time when there is only one brotherhood. I always appreciate your writes and the messages they proclaim, Keith.
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Date: 5/3/2016 9:48:00 AM
Pleasure reading this immersive piece, Keith. Brilliantly thought provoking - and with a lovely sweeping ending...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/3/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Michael... much appreciated! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 5/3/2016 9:32:00 AM
Very deep poem friend... One must have experienced these back and forth arguments you've expressed to understand the depths of the questions you've presented.... "Blue and saffron flight," I was confused about "saffron." Was this over India? Nice deep though-filled write...
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Date: 5/3/2016 10:03:00 AM
You're right... 'saffron' doesn't fit, so I changed it to 'epic...' a little better I think. Best wishes, Keith

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