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The Great Sun God

I looked over the horizon waited for the sun to rise time ticked by but darkness still rained and I thought how nice it would be if the sun rose right now and the heat that I craved the dawn was here now the more I thought the more it rose my brothers wounds healed from the battle of the night Hades will be upset the Underworld lost it's might Ares punched my arm and Thor lifted his hammer Zeus gave a smile and the sea god laughed a while I had made the sun rise and that is my job because I am Apollo the great sun god --For the contest I suppose--

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/12/2010 8:29:00 AM
Ryan, congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Glory gods (For Men Only)". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:31:00 PM
lol you suppose? well i suppose you did great on your poem :D congrats n.n
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Date: 8/6/2010 10:16:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Ryan
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Date: 8/6/2010 2:55:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your success in my GLORY 'gods' contest with this exceptional write.. thankxxx for supporting my contest ..happy weekend.. with luv..
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