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The Graveyard

The wind seemed colder that December day, as I walked among the graves marked with marble so gray. Some had a story carved for all to see, while others were just marked, Rest In Peace. Pictures of the deceased, were on a few, as I looked a little closer, to see how many I knew. Then in the distance, I saw a crowd, another loved one to be buried, then my head I bowed. Old graves stood out, their markers so tall, darker than most, like shadows at nightfall. Sad to think, some had to die so young, but way back then, not much could be done. Strange it may seem, to visit the dead, but facinating to me, on the life they led.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/13/2008 10:20:00 AM
Gardens of memories is what i call graveyards, another one of your best, your friend always, Ron
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Date: 7/13/2008 8:08:00 AM
Christy, you have this natural ability of touching everyones heart, when you reach for your pen and compose your visual art. You are so wonderfully gifted in every possible kind of way, god has blessed us all with you for another beautiful day. Wonderful Poem here as it takes me back in time when I was once a creator of head stones and the final date man. Thank You for being the wonderful person you are and for giving us never enough of you. MPK
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Date: 7/12/2008 9:05:00 PM
Excellent Narrative with perfect form. It is good you think that way, instead of focusing on the negative aspect. Very enjoyable write. Love, Ivy
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Date: 7/12/2008 5:22:00 PM
Christy... been there .. did that.. very nicely done.. I felt I was with you in that cemetery... Keep up the excellent writing... Constance
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