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The Grand Canyon

A canvass, deep, has been composed between red's blend with purple hues Cruel paths of glaciers, mighty swords deeply carved a threshold grand Each turn of compass, leaves a brand, forever leaves a breathless word Green rivers whipped to whitened froth have nourished pines upon the ridge It carved a place exempt from time, and justifies a Godly mind Keeping watch ore' a western floor loom monoliths on a timeless shore Morning suns of shimmering wines Nightly stars and moonlight shines Ours to cherish and explore, Past and future, native lore Question not the splendid wonder Rejoice with eyes, behold and conquer saturate the trails down under That if one stands within this glory, and understands the folklore stories, voices freeze with questions asked, while sunlight peaks, where ancients gasped! Xanadu in fact, exclaimed You came, you saw, a crevice famed Zenith, is Grand, and a canyon is named __________________________________________ 8/29/14 For Contest Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 9/9/2014 10:28:00 PM
And back again with big congrats Carrie on such a winning beautiful write!
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:18:00 PM
WOW, I just love what you did here... congrats...LINDA
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:41:00 PM
I really loved this poem Carrie wonderful flow to it congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
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Date: 9/8/2014 6:16:00 AM
Great Abecedarian form with a unique theme; very well and easily expressed. A much deserved podium win, Carrie...congratulations! // paul
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Date: 9/8/2014 4:47:00 AM
Cleverly crafted poem, Carrie. Congrats on the win
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:36:00 AM
Excellent Carrie, congratulations.....Seren
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Date: 9/7/2014 8:15:00 PM
So cool Carrie! glad you used Xanadu!! ;) Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2014 4:02:00 PM
yor usual good job, Carrie congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:47:00 PM
beautifully penned Carrie many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:37:00 PM
This is a beautiful Abecedarian poem Carrie. Congratulations on a very well deserved top spot.
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:44:00 PM
I imagine that those last few lines were really difficult to compose. The whole poem is so good I can honestly say I have never read an abecedarian to match it.
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Date: 8/29/2014 11:57:00 PM
Wow as grand as the grand canyon is ur write Carrie! sure to fly high! good luck!
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