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The Golden Scene

Sun above, looking Thoughtfully at itself in Immense clear water. Adds golden sparkle To the leaves of the palm trees, On the green island Which looks like inset Against the large, vast sea that Stretches till skyline..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/18/2012 10:56:00 AM
Radical description...... That's poetry for all. Nice one with beautiful images.
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Date: 9/6/2012 10:03:00 AM
feel the beauty of your golden scene...great work Sadaf..congratulation !!! :) SK
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Date: 7/25/2012 6:14:00 AM
Beautiful win poem Sadaf, love it. - Congrats!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/21/2012 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Sadaf! All are beautiful, but the first haiku is my favorite (love the thoughtful sun). :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:01:00 PM
Great winning work..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2012 12:45:00 PM
great write Sadaf,I felt the rays
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Date: 7/20/2012 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice picturing of this island scene.
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Date: 7/19/2012 12:46:00 PM
congrats sadaf on a lovely win for this gorgeous painting in words luv..
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Date: 7/19/2012 11:44:00 AM
congrats to you..I love the "sun looking thoughtfully"..,,BG
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:49:00 PM
A lovely write, Sadaf. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/18/2012 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win with your lovely series of haikus. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/18/2012 11:01:00 AM
Sadaf, congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 7/18/2012 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Sadaf. Love, Carol
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