Get Your Premium Membership

The God Dimension

The God Dimension The soil in the field where they plant vines is rusty red I took mould in my hand it was moist and it felt as living pulsing of goodness that will never turn stale but keep producing goodness that makes one happy to be a part of nature unlike religious people who believe they are in charge of nature, that it should bend to their will which is always detrimental to the common good. There are times when I’m in a dreamy mood when I wish I could believe in a higher power some deity that would come down and sort out our mess. Alas, we are nature and God lost heart and became a rain cloud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/5/2015 8:46:00 AM
Oh JaN Oh those dreamy moods. Mold and religion together is an interesting thought. I've just come off watching some old Christopher Hitchens interviews. love, Kathy
Login to Reply
Hansen Avatar
Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 6/7/2015 1:56:00 PM
thanks, Kath, I have been watching many Christopher Hitchens tape too, he was an erudite man said witty things, but in a way he was a schoolboy writing bad words on the blackboard. you see God is a contradiction and therefore easy to mock

Book: Shattered Sighs