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The God and the Man

A man awaiting the God’s judgement
God said, “You’re evil but no atonement”
“So am I”, the man said
“Will send to hell”, the God said
“I lived in hell, can’t repeat punishment”

The God thought for a while and announced
“I will send you to heaven instead”
“You can’t do that” the man said
“Why can’t I? the God asked
“ Never, in no way it can be envisioned"

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September 20,2014.
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Bl Devnath Date: 12/22/2013 9:49:00 AM HA HA HA.........., nice fun enjoyed. Loved always, my friend, bl Login to Reply

Poet. Undertaker Date: 12/20/2013 7:38:00 AM Dr.Mehta, even "THE GOD" is crazy in your case.If he takes a decision he has to hold by that.Changing his decision and getting humiliated by an ordinary mortal.very bad!Even "THE GOD" operates without any basis.Very,very bad.hi..hi..hi..just fun my friend. (: ) Jenish. Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/19/2013 10:00:00 AM Interesting work Ram. Well done on your nice pen! Login to Reply

Lara Wash Date: 12/18/2013 9:12:00 PM Interesting poem Dr. Ram Mehta and thank you for commenting on my poem "There's forgiveness in a Smile" Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/18/2013 1:04:00 PM - Good one, Dr.Ram :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Leon Datu Date: 12/18/2013 12:13:00 PM Nice to goof around a bit. This made me smile, Dr. Ram. Thank you for your comment. Warm greetings! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/18/2013 9:30:00 AM Interesting ideas penned..Soup mail soon..Sara Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 12/18/2013 2:37:00 AM Dr. Ram it has been a very long time since we spoke, quite a thought provoking poem this one…David Login to Reply Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/18/2013 3:48:00 AM Yeah, Nice to see you, David