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'the Glowing Love'

Flashed as a star; Flooded as water and Grew up as the forest, The love inside me! Approached,approached Seven stars, River and a thousand trees danced into chest. Approached,approached To whisper inside you: You're the moon... Without you I'm a rainy cloud You're the ocean... Without you I'm a wretch bird of sea You're the essence - fragrance of flower Without you I'm soulless jasmine Approached,approached; To whisper anthem love into thy spirit

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Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 12:43:00 PM

Fatima, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/23/2013 9:04:00 PM

Dear Skat_Love ..Really I am blessed to have such friends here in " poetry soup" thank you my friend!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/23/2013 8:04:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Fatima

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/23/2013 9:01:00 PM

Thank you my friend Dr.Ram..!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 9:59:00 PM

enjoying this one again....PD

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/23/2013 9:00:00 PM

And I am enjoying seeing you around always my dear friend Linda XXOXXD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2013 9:42:00 PM

love the double Approaching sound.. Fatima, i sure enjoyed the passion in this one.. I am enjoying the different changes in your write.. you do good in making the reader feel the emotions, whichever the moods are... enjoying your work this far... Your Newest Fan ----LINDA

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/2/2013 4:40:00 PM

Hi dear Linda I am blessed to have such friend like you.<3

Jiril Clemons

Date: 9/25/2013 9:02:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Fatima. deep expression. Check out some of mine. Might see some you like. peace.

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/27/2013 1:22:00 PM

Thank you dear Jiril Clemos for comment and sure i'll visit your page. Regards

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2013 1:15:00 PM

- A really nice poem Fatima, a pleasure to read today. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/27/2013 1:24:00 PM

with my pleasure dear Anne Lise .oxox