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The Glow Upon His Face

The glow upon his face makes the moon look bleak His lowered gentle voice like a sunset song knocks each girl off her feet. The sparkle in his eyes shame the brightest star Each melodic whisper in her ear makes her heart beat fast and travel far. Her cheeks once pale like white-washed linen sheets now own the perfect flush because He found the secret code of how to make her roses blush. The way he runs his hand across his brow have made her wish for her cascading hair to be brushed by his fingertips. Every night she dreams of him beneath a waterfall and every night it is her name She hears him call. He wraps her in his arms in each serene sleep Sharing one last dance by the forest creek

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Date: 4/28/2017 1:48:00 PM
Hi Charmaine , If I was going to ask someone to write a poem about me this is it ,,,,lol , Beautiful soso romantic and flows like a gentle stream :))) Hugs
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Date: 1/15/2017 12:00:00 PM
You have a lot well written poems I must say I enjoyed this one, Louis.
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Date: 1/11/2017 5:21:00 PM
I have no comment that could do this poem justice! loved it! :)
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Date: 1/10/2017 12:44:00 PM
Some beautiful words in this Charmaine, Has a nice melody flowing along!!! Well written again!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 1/10/2017 12:19:00 PM
Sigh...so beautiful Charmaine. To feel this about someone, to see that glow on his face, to dream of him calling your name, is such a wonderful feeling and that ending line..."Sharing one last dance by the forest creek" So very enchanting and heart touching. Took my breath away.
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Date: 1/10/2017 12:13:00 PM
Beautiful...a sweet song sung makes one swoon.
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