The Glow (Senryu)
Your touch makes me glow
like bright leaves with Chlorophyll
in the autumn breeze
© Joseph, 10/30/07
© All Rights Reserved
Comments: The Japanese Senryu format has three lines as follows: the first
has five syllables, the second seven syllables, and the third five syllables. The
pattern is 5/7/5 for a total of seventeen syllables. The Senryu is about an
emotional expression, human nature, and things in the human realms which
maybe satiric or humorous.
Copyright © Joseph Spence Sr | Year Posted 2007
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