Get Your Premium Membership

The Glance

There was this girl who I took in at a glance Would have missed her if not perchance In her early twenties, frail and tall Wearing hand-me-down pinks, near a shopping mall She was looking for someone, perhaps a brother Possibly young and playful and doted by his sister But her eyes were sad And the glance at her made me feel all bad Battered by rocks on a turbulent sea Family fortunes may have sunk to an unfathomable deep Deprived of strong foundations which make a girl walk tall Unable to claw back, crippled by the fall That haunting look still depresses As I see confident girls with swinging bags and long tresses Jauntily skip through the doorways of the mall To shop with carts in the well-stocked hall That look in her eyes had a story to tell Of reading the future from her present life of hell It reflected shock and portrayed loss And a life without hope or sheen or gloss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/24/2016 1:56:00 PM
I've been burned by 'glances'... Good poem!!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/23/2013 12:55:00 PM
Enjoyed this write. A look can say and reveal so much. Well penned. Em :)
Login to Reply
Majumdar Avatar
Sumit Majumdar
Date: 3/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 3/23/2013 9:39:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
Login to Reply
Majumdar Avatar
Sumit Majumdar
Date: 3/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
Thanks,,but I feel disturbed.
Date: 3/23/2013 9:03:00 AM
The eyes always have a story to tell. Thanks for the read.
Login to Reply
Majumdar Avatar
Sumit Majumdar
Date: 3/24/2013 5:52:00 AM
Thanks

Book: Shattered Sighs