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The Giving Trees 1

I went about to pray one day to Jesus, and as I looked around I gazed in my way upon a place a ways, afar, and so I could see the generous gapes of the giving trees, as so they are. Nestled down between the broken valley (of Gods’ open will). As they were one better for me to be seen, and in a greater measure and for the long standing passion of my fancy, still. For yes they are the one true rare beauty’s left in the way of this one most humble land. With the wholesome hearts and outstretched hands. As amid this... the ladder days of the Summers fall, they stand at their ready to provide their goodness to whom ever... may come to call. For they are open too for the many come a feathered wing. To bring for them the finer nature of a better thing. With one a purpose brought forth... by the way of an open heart, one so softly spoken. There they live for to serve God as they move in the way of the pureness, and by the way of the promise one given of His tender love, and devotion, and as well they are one better also as a haven, and as well... for the wisdom so honestly given and found to be well, within the nature, of the raven. As to offer, a sweeter fruit is what they bring. As to sway they dance. As in their joy they sing, and for the love of a life as so to renew. Another day has risen up and shines upon them mid sparkling morning dew, and if you were to hear them in the depths of your soul, you would have listened. As gingerly they move in unison. So as to shimmer in-their way together, as they glisten, and as for a gift for all. A grateful heart is for them their only passion. As it is in their way, and by our Lord God the Father, One so... (forever, fashioned.) “God is love, and he who abides in love abides in God, and God in him.“ John 4:16 (New King James Version) I pick all of the Winter Holy days because I feel and believe this poem in its forming and message can be found in the very cruxes of each and every one of them, believing as well that in their conditioning's as they are, each are in and by their virtues all inclusive to the God of our Fathers, thereby entirely open to the reliance in and relevance of remaining in an honest state of consideration of the omnipotence, and purity of His blessings of Love, Mercy, Forgiveness, and Grace. In every branch, in the representation of the tree in this poem, I believe it is an honest telling of the true Love of God! Hyphens are so used for recording purposes for the disabled.

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Date: 12/10/2010 8:30:00 PM
I invite you to read: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=6883 as well investigate as to why I ask you of this, "please":. I am so honored you have stopped by friend you have blessed me-yes - I wish as well to bless you. ~ Love ~ James ~ (or if you will) ~ e v e r y o n e 1 ~
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Date: 12/9/2010 8:05:00 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GBZACUxTFLU&feature=related Noticed Christianity was not one of the Religions given as an acceptable one to write for in this contest. Might ask why-yes... ? Tsk I guess, but I have a consideration if but only one as to why. I could be wrong though, the reasoning for why I myself entered this poem into your contest. ""We are all ingrained if you will with one innate quality given us by God I feel, "The need and desire to believe-in, worship something-yes... .""
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:21:00 AM
soft smile ..a sheep in wolf's clothing..this is a Christian verse in the shape of a Christmas Tree..the tradition of which was taken from the Germanic Pagens (the Christians LABELed them pagen but wished to convert them so they encorporated their customs) this is NOT a poem from a Christian showing an attempt to learn of the beauty of another religious way to higher power. You must STUDY the Holy Day on the list given or the verse is not acceptable in this contest. Light & Love
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