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The Girl That Lost Her Way-

I thought I saw your curious eye starring through the key hole of my old cedar door it was confirmed when I opened it and saw your lipstick painted cigarette still smoking on the floor I hope you weren’t trying to take a look into my unspoken thoughts of speculating sorrow because they will not be revealed until they scatter about my dreams that will deliver me to tomorrow and no you’re not invited to watch the slideshow that will projected onto the closed lids of my amber eyes that viewing is reserved for those who have removed their vale to show who they are and extinguish their disguise but for you to do that you would have to be true to yourself and that’s impossible with your partly cloudy personality because as a casualty of conformity you have sacrificed your hopes and dreams that once accompanied your originality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 8:54:00 AM
WoW! I have been reading through your poetry and one thing is evident. You are a very talented and imaginative individual. Thanks
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Date: 4/28/2009 9:22:00 PM
this is really good:)
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:02:00 AM
i like this alot and thanks for the comment
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Date: 4/14/2009 12:29:00 PM
and once again, WOW; you've blown me away the style with which you amaze our eyes must carry into your other poetry. i think i'll take a look. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:33:00 AM
wow, Luke i'm not going to lie this is a really great poem, its so heartfelt and descripted :) -Stacy
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:37:00 PM
Wow, hard biting reality. Good write Luke
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