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The Girl Acrossthe Lawn

I look upon the girl across the lawn Who looks like you And my day has gone to dreams Only to find your face in the clouds Has pushed the sun away

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2013 10:04:00 PM

Michael, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2013 3:14:00 AM

Michael, you write very well - you've posted several good poems. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Read and write your comment at other "poets' poems and you will get back. - (Give to get) - We are many in this "family" always nice with even more members. - Wishing you a lovely Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2013 5:37:00 PM

Hello Michael Ainsley, , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "This contest is only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA