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The Gifts a Day Brings

What will this day bring - its gifts of lingering sunshine & flower storms, the thundering of xanthous hues, bright beams of crimson and green… What will this day bring - a knock or a ring, my feet go, the wheel teeters and totters, the pedals pressed for nearly an hour. A welcomed guest of my father. His tongue will not sputter, but will speak of his thoughts, memories and belong to me for a lick of time. I lean into his smile, his voice, his melodious sadness at times, lessened by the years. Who can cry anymore, only resign to loss. He always compliments on the scent of the familial cooking even before it reaches his nose - a habit I suppose. I learn, only from subtleness of his likes, for Dad is not given to complaints. He will not hide his ills but neither does he spill all his aches and pains out like a feeble man for he is of strong stock, not given to the sport that some old people tote. He climbs the stairs each day - his computer, clarinet, and boxes of stuff are there - my husband thinks his things must catch air, be sorted, thrown out, before they become our load to carry. My spouse thought our kids stuff should have been taken when they left - not realizing, life doesn’t work that way. There is staying power in life and death, wheeling & dealing in its time, not ours. Settle in, stay on course, make the most of the Summer weather. Oh the gifts a day brings - knocks & rings, a traffic storm, pasta shopping, saucy & cheesy bubbling, dusting and vacuuming. I live for such productive lingerings - blessings. 6/27/2023

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Date: 6/29/2023 12:25:00 PM
Obviously the men in your life. This piece expresses their values and your in them. I wonder if they'd paint you the dutiful wife.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2023 2:53:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/29/2023 6:47:00 AM
- You never know what the day will bring...with an open mind I'm sure it will be something wonderful...lovely written, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2023 2:50:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lisr! Hugs
Date: 6/29/2023 3:40:00 AM
Wonderful lingering and blessings, Kim. Such detailed picture of observations--or the gifts a day brings, as you say!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2023 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 6/28/2023 10:40:00 PM
Appealing reflections. So well composed, dear Kim. Alas I cannot resign to loss.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2023 6:09:00 AM
Likewise hard to think of my mom…still hurts the brain if I think too much. Hug ~ Kim
Date: 6/28/2023 5:39:00 PM
Your reflections on the day's gifts are mature, deep -- profoundly resonant, Kim. This is superb! Thanks for sharing, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/28/2023 2:47:00 PM
I agree with your way of thinking, Kim. We receive gifts all the time, but many fail to benefit from them. I cherish little things which bring back awesome memories and put a smile on my face when the going is hard. ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! I appreciate you! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 6/28/2023 1:29:00 PM
I love the way you think here, Kim. Great poem. Your husband sounds a bit like mine. I hate when he complains about all my stuff he wants thrown away.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 2:58:00 PM
LOL…right?!
Date: 6/28/2023 11:38:00 AM
We never know what a day will bring, but God does. It is wonderful that He gives us some wonderful days even though there are times when they are not so wonderful but I like to say those are from the devil. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara!
Date: 6/28/2023 11:35:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette!
Date: 6/28/2023 11:34:00 AM
Right on the money, Kim. I hope this day brings you good health, good friends and happiness. Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 12:34:00 PM
Thank you, kind friend! Likewise, be blessed, Pangie!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, kind friend! Likewise, be blessed, Pangie!

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