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A March unstable, April drizzles At last, now dawns the month of May........ Children gather 'round a table Making paste of flour, water, guidance from a loving mother with pictures drawn in rainbow colors Pretty paper doilies landed In the hands of lassies, laddies Creating prizes, cone shaped fans… Then, quickly running out the door To pick spring beauties, one by one Fresh lilies of the greenest valley, wild wood fern, and yellow dahlias Gathering the dew-kissed stems Sweet and fresh as dawn begins Filled with springtime, fresh with bloom Innocence, was cut and honed Into bright-sprigged paper cones Accomplishments, each one to own On May the first, each small bouquet Ready with the vast array Of blossoms from the pasture flowers softly fragrant, gifts of meadows The paper cones were flower filled Small bouquets of sweet perfume Then down the dusty road they trudged Side by side, with grins of pride No greater pleasure as a child The thought of bringing someone smiles Timid knocking on a door “Surprise...Surprise! Look what’s in store!” The little legs now running fast, And down the road, quite out of breath Behind a tree, where they would hide And watch them find this flower prize Must not....get caught.....must not get caught! And always they were taught That bringing gifts to make them sigh Was worth a lot ..so worth the thought A thoughtful way to light one's eyes On May the first, with small bouquets they would rehearse, a verse to say To spread come spring, then run away ____________________________________ Submitted for Isaiah's Contest: THE FIRST OF MAY 4/25/15

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Date: 5/8/2015 2:51:00 PM
Lovely, Carrie. So much imagery and detail that flows so well with your well-chosen words. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:37:00 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATS in Isaiah Zerbst's contest *SKAT*
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:36:00 PM
such vivid imagery Carrie many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:28:00 PM
Carrie. Congratulations on your first day of may win. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2015 4:47:00 PM
Very nicely put together Carrie, It brings back sweet memories. Lovely.
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Date: 4/28/2015 4:41:00 PM
MY, a lot of work on this one, Carrie. It is really kicking my butt to come up with even the idea!!! And probably I have less than a few days to think of something. uggggg.
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Date: 4/28/2015 4:12:00 PM
Well done... well done indeed. Would I have your permission to email this to 50 - 60 elderly couples that I know would just love it? I would certainly give you "notice" as the author and directions on getting to more of the same. Again, well done. oldbuck
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/28/2015 5:12:00 PM
I am flattered and honored. If it would just bring one smile to have a poem of mine read, I am a happy girl ! Thanks for asking Buck !! :)
Date: 4/28/2015 11:39:00 AM
Wow such a great poem and memory can't help but get a number 1. Light & Love
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Date: 4/28/2015 11:38:00 AM
NICE AND WELL ARTICULATED AND WRITTEN POEM,MEANINGFUL AS WELL, KEEP IT UP HEY!!
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Date: 4/28/2015 10:43:00 AM
I see this picture as if I were in it!
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Date: 4/28/2015 9:30:00 AM
good piece of poetry
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Date: 4/28/2015 8:35:00 AM
One of these days, I'm gonna be the VERY FIRST to comment on your latest poem but you're just to doggone POPULAR! Small wonder...
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Date: 4/26/2015 12:49:00 AM
The descriptions so rich and easy to visualise. Truly lovely...
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