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The Gift

Oh, Lord, bestow me courage to cope up with life’s challenges So that I may get over the life long hurdles. Grant me the courage, My Lord, to stand up for what I believe in In order to express my true beliefs without fear. O Lord, I need peace of mind So as to remain sane in this mad, mad world. Grant me the patience which I have lost So as to withstand the insults hurled at me. Oh Lord, Oh Lord, in return I sincerely promise If I cannot help anyone, at least I will not cheat anyone. If I cannot love anyone, I will not hate anyone And I sincerely promise, in return, My Lord. If I cannot praise anyone, I won’t be jealous of anyone. Oh God, I need your blessings forever, My Savior. My Savior, give me no more gifts that I can’t wield it. +++ September 5, 2014 Form: Verse ( Anaphora) Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: The Gift by Verlena Walker

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Date: 9/14/2014 1:33:00 PM
WOW so great, so sweet. Well done on your win
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:43:00 AM
Amen and congratulations.
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Date: 9/11/2014 7:06:00 PM
Superlative Dr. Ram and you received a 1st place spot for doing this contest with such flare. Verlena sends her Congratulations!
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Date: 9/11/2014 8:56:00 AM
Hi Dr Ram, Wonderfully expressive and heartfelt words.Congrats on your deserved win. All the best Theresa xx
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Date: 9/11/2014 5:48:00 AM
A beautiful, divine piece you have penned. Congratulations for your well, deserved win Dr. Ram Mehta! ^_^
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:03:00 AM
:) inspiring and prayerful poem..:) kudos dr. Ram..:)
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Date: 9/11/2014 1:32:00 AM
I love this prayer on God-dependence, Dr. Ram! It is beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2014 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations. God bless you. Love and Prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/10/2014 11:07:00 PM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice solid prayer/poem.. Great win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 9/10/2014 8:02:00 PM
What a wonderful expression of anaphora within the prayer...addressing God by his most common name, Lord, and then a slight variation towards the end. congratulations are due, Dr. Ram. I enjoyed your most unique prayer
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:20:00 PM
Dr Ram,, Congratulations, on your awesome, sweet wonderful win. God Bless, Love LINDA
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram. I love this sincere heart cry.
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Date: 9/10/2014 4:59:00 PM
Dr. Ram, congratulations on a well deserved win. Perfectly written and reads beautifully...... Great meaning..... Jake
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:41:00 PM
Big congratulations, Dr. Ram on your superlative win! Exquisite prayer! Pandita
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful prayer that should be the wish everyone would want to express. Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:27:00 PM
How well u hv put it up in ur magnificent write Dr Ram! Good luck in contest!
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