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The Gift

I found a rusted trunk Accidently, in a corner of My storage room Eagerly I opened it That was filled with my textbooks Almost of the elementary school Most of its were white ants eaten Except the top of a peacock feather A gift given my girlfriend at the school Now the past becomes present Remember the green eyed girl And the moments we spend beside lily ponds Fishing in shallow river Playing in muds under the rain And many many that makes me happy now a relief from the boring life now .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/13/2012 12:00:00 PM
Memories can be so rich and satisfying, making a boring life palatable, although I don't think you're bored when you can write pieces like this! BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/13/2012 12:19:00 PM
thank you for your kind words .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 8:11:00 AM
Love the imagery here from start to finish!! regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/13/2012 9:25:00 AM
thank you .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 8:03:00 AM
this is beautiful, and i love your name it's beautiful as well, jayachandran! Thanks for sharing and are you new to p.s.? i hope you like it! =Juli-Michelle=
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/13/2012 9:26:00 AM
thank you .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 6:19:00 AM
OH...You found today`s treasure chest of happy memories, nice. - Well done poem, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/13/2012 6:56:00 AM
thank you dear poetess .jk
Date: 6/13/2012 6:16:00 AM
Peace be with you my friend.
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/13/2012 6:57:00 AM
thank you dear poet .jk

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