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Dear freinds, poetry soupers!

So sorry I've not been around lately for I have a message to the world, THE GIFT! I now am presenting a TV show called Mind, Body and Sol here in Spain. I have also started my second book, my poems will be posted! love you all!!!!

THE GIFT is the answer of a bright new dawn

The law of attraction in poetry form

These poems guide you to a life of success 

They are simple instructions, one can easily digest

I live by the law and my life is so sweet

I would love to share this inspirational treat

What I think about I bring about, It's incredibly true 

It's all in the THE GIFT about dreams that come true

We all need hope, and now is the time

The key to success, a changing of minds

When you take this on trust, what you are about to read

It will show you how, in life to succeed.

The theory has been around for thousands of years

But been kept a secret, so it appears

Now it’s out, of this there is no doubt

I would like to tell you what it’s all about.

What you are thinking, and how you feel

Is creating your future, It's called the law of attraction

And on this subject, I have been very well tutored

Life seems to be full of highs and lows

We all need a shield for the knocks and the blows

Controlled thoughts, and controlled feelings

Will grant you your wishes, and all you are dreaming.

Nothing comes easy, like learning to drive

But when you have mastered it well, your spirits alive

Nothing can stop you; you're well on your way

Confidence takes over, it’s a brighter day

The same on this subject, in which that I write

For when you have mastered the concept

Your goals are in sight, you become what you think about

Sounds crazy but true, It's all in the poems

Written solely for you.

Read the rhymes, over and over

THE GIFT will be your 4 leaf clover

We all have the power, we all can succeed

Enjoy the poems


Copyright © simone segal

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  1. Date: 2/23/2010 3:57:00 PM
    very well Simone ..... interesting when you describe the process of learning very true to master take time and interesting poem ..... best of luck on your new book .thanks for stoping by and reading mine .

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 3:12:00 AM
    passion!that's what i see burning through these lines!

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 4:04:00 PM
    Dear Simone, your poem, The Gift, is absolutely beautiful and deserves to be published. I know how exciting it is to have your work published, and I hope you will have that excitement many times in your life. It seems as if you have indeed found your special world. Love, Amy.

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 2:32:00 PM
    Hi Simone I really, really loved your poem the gift congratulations on your new book coming out, I wish you all the best let me know so I can purchase one. I wanted to know are you self publishing because I going to publish my book in September 2010 I need some advice about publishing Thank you love Patricia O. Jaye.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 4:21:00 AM
    I live by the dictum 'Fake it 'till you make it'! It works! Congrats on your impending publication, see you thought yourself into making it!

  1. Date: 2/8/2010 3:44:00 AM
    Simone, Congratulations on publishing your book! I would love to buy a copy when it is out. Please let us know where to purchase a copy. Your poem introduces your book wonderfully. I have read The Law of Attraction and gave my daughter's fiancee a copy just the other day. He is loving it. It makes life so much easier. Thank you for your lovely comment on Reiki Music. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 2/8/2010 1:14:00 AM
    Simone, I had to drop by and thank you very much for the wonderful comments you left on my work the other day. I have begun my journey through yours and am so far VERY impressed. Bless you x

  1. Date: 2/7/2010 11:55:00 AM
    Simone I love you and your poetry, you have the gift and I believe that I do as well, I owe it all to this wonderful piece

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 9:47:00 AM
    Simone, darling, how nice of you stop by ... I see you have your eyes set on the summit of light, and praying for your great flight. Your work is still very positive as usual. Nothing cheers like your reading mt work and commenting. Thanks a lot, one love.

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 10:18:00 AM
    Part#2 But I am sure many can relate to this because I just cant wear my clothes like I used to or I would just burst,but I do have to admit that this is a wonderful rhyme that you have written here and I wish you all the success in world ,because you are truly gifted and blessed beyond measure and it shows through your poetry prose, Have a wonderful afternoon and thank you again for sharing this with all of us, Dean

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 10:17:00 AM
    Part #1 Hi Simone thank you for visiting and leaving a kind comment on (Has anyone ever told you) I am truly grateful.I used to dress to impress, but as I got older things began to change and now I wear my clothes for comfort instead yet my clothes still match

  1. Date: 2/1/2010 2:43:00 AM
    It's a beauty you have come out with. A brilliant piece of poetry that too so much inspiring and showing a nice way to find one's goal and glory. Beautiful one Thanks and Many thanks for the information of "My Dream Love" being featured poem this week. It is so nice of you. I have placed a new poem hope you would like it too- I Feel Sad today. Best wishes and love Ravindra

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 3:01:00 PM
    Just stopping by to say hello.Hope you are doing well.

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 5:58:00 AM
    Your optimisim is a beautiful thing. This is a way to bottle it! Thanks

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 12:06:00 AM
    Nice write. I totally believe in the law of attraction. Thanks for reminding me how important it is to success.

  1. Date: 1/26/2010 12:20:00 PM
    new poem posted

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 4:51:00 PM
    why all the capitals? i have been told that they are a grammatic error for a poet. thanks for the review.

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 3:51:00 PM
    Thanks for the comment, Simone. I enjoyed this and love the sentiment. New to this site - love it! - and don't know my way around yet. I'll be reading more of you as I enjoyed this one so much. Keep up the writing and good luck in your publishing endeavors

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 3:44:00 PM
    love the rhyming i think i already have this gift sometimes. and your right it is a gift. john

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 1:39:00 PM
    new poem posted