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The Giant Pine Trees

the giant pine trees make the forest a dark place- - moonlight filters through

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Jack. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/20/2011 5:13:00 PM

Jack great work with the your "the giant pine trees" , congrats on a worthy entry . Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2011 8:47:00 PM

Congrats Jack on another stunning win for excellent poetry luv.. hand is OK but still painful to type.. start therapy Monday..oh..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:12:00 AM

ah, yes, I remember this one. Congrats on the win, jack!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/19/2011 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem, jack

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2011 11:59:00 PM

JACK, Congrats in my contest~SID

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/17/2011 8:23:00 PM

A magical place to be, moonlight is made for poetry and you painted the picture perfectly with your pen!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2011 6:31:00 PM

such a vibrant view Jack.. should do well in the contest..good luck luv.. moonlight always draws romance to me..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 3:55:00 PM

This is such a wondrous picture you made, jack. well, time for me to get home! YOu'll be my last comment of the afternoon! LUv, andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2011 2:41:00 PM

Great one in using opposites..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2011 2:18:00 PM

You have the "twist" in your haiku that Brian mentioned in his blog today, Jack. Finding rays of light in the darkness is a lifelong goal. Very inspirational write! Love, carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/16/2011 1:35:00 PM

This is a wonderful write Jack!! Even the darkness gets a little moonlight, very cool(literally and figuratively)! A very good Haiku(like I'm a professional)! Lovely work!!

Tony Lane

Date: 11/16/2011 1:31:00 PM

And when there is just a little fog it looks really cool. Tony