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I grew up where we all had bikes and skateboards down at the bike jumps.

His name was legend, written in lore, Riding his bike like no human should. He’d vault and swerve, plunge and dance, Leap frogging my entire childhood. He could sprint from a stop, faster than fast, Past everyone else on the road. Till he came to the top of the sharpest ridged gully, That’s where he eventually slowed. He slowed not to be careful, or safe or guarded, Or because of the exhausting conquest. But rather so he could balance on one spindly wheel, All along the sharpest edged crest. He’d be there for hours, any type of day, Be it hot or cold, rain, ice, or smog. Until, almost crippled, his bike and him one, He rode his way home again, alone in the fog. This night he came to the dark murky road, just out from home, He peered left but didn’t look right. Now he’s the ghost on a bike, wistfully riding the streets of this town, Riding silently every night.

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Date: 6/8/2016 8:05:00 AM
Very interesting, I have heard of ghosts haunting houses and cars, never bikes. I enjoyed your story.
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Date: 6/7/2016 8:00:00 AM
I like this spooky tale. Congrats on Youer win.
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Date: 5/10/2016 11:51:00 PM
This write is about a legend who still is! This is very good Lewis and I can see why he got that name! :-)
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Date: 5/11/2016 12:30:00 AM
Thanks Walter, I think every town has the legend of the local kid who could ride or skate or do everything with a touch of genius from all our memories. thanks :)

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