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The Ghost and Me

I rode my horse to town and back today And passed a house so old, so bleak, so bare The age a hundred years or more they say- And found by chance a ghost who lived just there I said, "Hello, you look distraught, my friend. "A ghost like you I've never seen before." He said,"I haunt this shack without an end, "And still no one has walked inside that door." "My horse just fell and broke my neck right here. "I've done my best to haunt this place, you see." I said,"Old man,it's time to spread some fear! "Climb up behind, we'll find your place to be." "Climb up behind, you don't weigh much, I 'spect." "I won't", said he,"Last time I broke my neck." 10/22/16 For contest English Sonnet

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Date: 11/7/2016 2:53:00 AM
Congrats Larry, for your placement with this fine sonnet!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/6/2016 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations Larry...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 11/6/2016 9:34:00 AM
this made me smile, larry.. congrats on your placement!..huggs
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:22:00 PM
Thanks, Nette, a smile is a nice reward for writing something and i appreciate it..Larry
Date: 11/6/2016 9:21:00 AM
Ha ha, this is great. Congrats on your win.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:24:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. Nice compliment and I appreciate it!..Larry
Date: 11/6/2016 8:16:00 AM
LOVE THIS LARRY!!!! A sonnet with a ghostly humor and a punch line....
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:27:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it, John. Not everyone appreciates a sonnet that tries to be funny, but I like writing them...Larry
Date: 11/5/2016 7:34:00 PM
Great sonnet, Larry. Many congrats on your win. Lainey
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Lainey! Good to hear from you...Larry
Date: 11/5/2016 6:05:00 PM
Larry, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Love the ending lines! Janice
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. I enloyed the contest..thanks for sponsoring it..Larry
Date: 10/23/2016 7:32:00 AM
Cleverly written sonnet, notably imaginative, ending line is killer Larry. Good luck in the contest. Heads up 'town'.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/23/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Paloma, and thanks for the "Heads up"...missed that one!..Larry
Date: 10/22/2016 11:13:00 PM
Written beautifully love it
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/23/2016 12:51:00 AM
Thank you so much!!..Larry

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