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The Ghost

There's a smile I get when I look at you . When I look in your eyes I know you feel it too. I'm in love with you but I'm so confused. You make me feel like I'm being used. When times are hard and I need you the most. That's when I turn around and your just a ghost. You think that you can come and go. But I'm telling you girl that you've got to know. Your not the only girl I know out there. So I'm telling you girl let me know you care. Someday soon you just may see. You'll be looking around but you wont find me. You can search from the mountains to the coast. Look High and low but I'll be the ghost. Is that what you want? What should we do? You know how I feel. Do you love me too?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 10:55:00 PM
Nice rhyme, but I do not see the iambic pentameter,the Heroic Couplet should be in the iambic pentameter but I am not the best judge on it anyway, I know you should have 10 or 11 syllables per line. Some of the lines do not fit, but it is still a good rhyme. Judy Riley
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