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The Getaway

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The Getaway

                                                       away with
                                                    you all my own
                                 to play in shadows on a stage of hearts...
                                                       love spills
                                                      from a cup
                                                 of us with a taste
                               that streams inspiration that we drink slow...

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  1. Date: 3/3/2012 7:41:00 PM
    Fine romanic imagery here. I like the line "to play in shadows on a stage of hearts" in particular. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 3:50:00 PM
    yes,this is really NICE. What a great final line it has too, Michael. So romantic.

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 10:51:00 AM
    sounds extremely romantic to me Michael luv.. a tempting rendezvous with one so loved is dynamic chemistry in play .. enjoy luv .. a great form to express tender feelings ..JG.. feeling this one so deepl...xoxo..

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 8:46:00 AM
    You are genius...... Sweet, honey...Loved your feeling of love, fantastic style. Enjoyed it with heart. We drink slowly... rightly penned. bl

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 8:16:00 AM
    sounds like an awesome getaway, enjoyed this journey, err, I might just do that :) lol

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 10:15:00 PM
    Michael, a wonderful week... you will take and steal... Me and Nathan, are having a wonderful week right now... but, word of advice... don't take your at us.. we are both on our laptop right now... anyways..i'm sending mail....always..pd

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 5:04:00 PM
    Wow such poetic words of love. Awesome

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 4:05:00 PM
    Oh Michael what a romantic you are and how glorious for the wonderful lady by your side! Hugs Lizzie

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 3:52:00 PM
    nice siesta of a poem with shape and flavor. Oh, no worries on the piece, it is merely an expression of place in a far off cosmos. just art man. I am all good. :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Cheers to you Michael I drink to your inspiration and your success, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:52:00 AM
    You have Soupy Mail Michael

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:31:00 AM
    Very passionate and romantic work.Quite subtle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the uplifting comments on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:07:00 AM
    very tender and touching! nice one!

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 8:36:00 AM
    yes, the best cups are always drank quite slowly, sipping on the inspiration. Lovely poem, Michael. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 8:36:00 AM
    very nicley put my friend:-)

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 8:27:00 AM
    Very Good!