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The Gardener's Lament

A fickle young gardener called Burt, Changed ladies much more than his shirt! Until he beguiled A vixen so wild He's now planted deep in the dirt! ©deborah burch 6/07/2012

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Date: 6/23/2012 11:18:00 AM
ya gots the meter rolling! She must have been related to that Bobbit woman? Light & Love
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Date: 6/9/2012 12:16:00 PM
oi!!!!!!!!!!!! love it..pd
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Deborah Burch
Date: 6/10/2012 11:23:00 AM
thanks pd :)
Date: 6/9/2012 2:53:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha,,poor sod...well done cap'n DEb...love David
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Deborah Burch
Date: 6/10/2012 11:20:00 AM
thank you David :)
Date: 6/8/2012 7:56:00 PM
Ha Ha! This is a fantastic write my friend, quite the funny one! I really enjoyed the humor and loveliness of this poem! Great Work!!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 6/8/2012 9:09:00 PM
thank you sweet russell :)

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