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The Garden Tomb

Stars burning across your garden, Saturn's shadow chasing my soul imprisoned within window-panes, pressing firmly your hand print knuckles whitened, brown eyes fixed through entombed vessels once a mirrored heart. Dancing in my darkened room, your white cotton gown tattered thread-bare transparent, shrouding your body. Your brazen smirk, inked indigo blue washing my old shirt in hate, wrapped arms are you wearing my skin a sanctuary of secrets-- bandaged hair tied with pinned bones loosely across a glass shattered back sipping that damn mint tea, a Jezebel's cure for insomnia. cradled with delicate hands, hands that clutch my spirit hands stained crimson red you murderer of memories. Darkness finds me awake paralyzed by endless weaving roads, my presence-- an aroma of the rotting apricot stained lips the faceless mural on a wall, life burning away layers of ash settling the soot on your black tear-stained pillows. Functioned divorced my body, wanting you to release me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/5/2010 8:56:00 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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Date: 1/4/2010 12:03:00 PM
The vivid imagery for a powerful poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on your gifted and unique talent! Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on your gifted and unique talent! Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jason. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2009 10:32:00 PM
Jason, best of luck in the next round...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:05:00 PM
Three poems making it through the first round in the contest. Way to go, Jason! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2 poems making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Jason. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2008 2:25:00 PM
I cannot believe this has not been reviewed yet! '...sanctuary of secrets,' '...tied back with pinned bones,' '...murderer of memories,' ...wonderful phrasing. You are the real deal my friend! Best wishes, Keith (PS please take a look at 'Nightscapes;' a tribute to Eliot.) Thanks!
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