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The Garden Structure

Along these Great Southern Shores Where Antarctic waters pound the beaches Or scorching Northerlies bring clouds of desert sands I do battle Having entered into a ferocious duel With the GARDEN STRUCTURE my hands of sinew and bone against elements sewn together a straight, silver representation of absolute forged by men who value strength my plans and intentions rough ink scratchings on a paper thin imagination against a cold heart, rigidly holding the line no wavering in steely resolution my sweating organic determination against a garden structure fighting boldly I ally myself with electronic torque certainty to screw metallic defiance to its very self Along these Great Southern Shores Where Antarctic waters pound the beaches Or scorching Northerlies bring clouds of desert sands Bloodied from battle I stand victorious after a ferocious duel With the Garden Structure

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Date: 4/16/2022 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on winning the garden structure duel, Scott! Your humor and imagination know no limits!! Pity I cannot see this the finished project! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/26/2021 1:15:00 AM
Hi Scott it's all part of life, and thats where Poetry is at home, it looks as if you had some Rain there now so long before you attempted An conquered that metallic foe.' I did ask before Are you on the Eyre peninsular? I stayed at Lock On the way through to W A, wow..' decades ago I'm ancient I reckon now, but not priceless Unfortunately lol ) ) ) ) ) this is long distance Lol' now known known as an L D L O L
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Date: 8/23/2021 3:42:00 PM
this is SO interesting. It's kind of different from what I usually see from you. Very nicely "structured!!"
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:58:00 AM
Wow super cool and stength, building and erecting a garden frame does sound a hard job and you make it seem such a rewarding duel to win. Kudos! ^^^^^^^--------------~~~\\~~~~>>>>>> Plz also do read and comment my newest poem
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Date: 7/7/2021 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on the construction. It looks really good and stable. You are close to the water and I can only imagine how rough the environment there is. However, you have made a valiant attempt to keep it under control. We have to take pleasure in what we can, you bring a smile to my face. The beams are really cool.
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Date: 6/29/2021 12:01:00 AM
Wow, great to read your poetry again, Scott, love the subject matter, and your insight of manual work.
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Date: 6/12/2021 2:57:00 PM
Well I think you could have been more Dram-atic Scott, I mean there was room for extreme (Whiskey Fortification) due to the exertative ramifications of such a fantabulation of Design and creation, ya know? I want you to Imagine a stress on the strine and rhyme there as you read Away Scott btw do you think I could find a niche In journalistic drama? Or 'news outlets to you Mate'
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Date: 6/4/2021 10:18:00 PM
Is that a picture of you building your garden structure? What a relief it must be to finish something that was a struggle. I love to garden as well.
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Date: 6/5/2021 5:22:00 PM
Yep that's me and the structure. A struggle, yes; but ultimately a bit of fun. The bottle gourd that it was constructed for is doing well. Thanks for the read, and comment.
Date: 5/31/2021 8:15:00 PM
The forces of nature imaginitive great write and insight into the world of agruculture thankyou for sharing and coments on my space poem
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:06:00 PM
I love the epic nature of the battle, Scott. Human force vs. nature's force. Chalk up one for mankind! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:33:00 PM
such drama for this. LOVE it.
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Date: 4/28/2021 12:36:00 PM
Wow, what a project. Well written Scott :)
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