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The Garden of Eden

In this Garden, Eve took on the omnipotent knowing she lacks power to eat the forbidden fruit. Her bite was great, as she tasted the fruit that she offers to Adam, to do the same. God told Adam to take his woman out of his Garden. Eden was unhappy this day. God dominion was now forbidden. Adam had bitten from the fruit as well. Therefore, Adam was damned to a life of labor. Ascribed to man, Eve was to be the child bearer. Life that you form man must be supported. Adam worked hard to raise Cain and Abel. This is guidance given. This is meaningful to your living. Man does not support his child life in the world but states he is religious. He hides from his obligations or he does not work. Therefore, a systematic problem evolves, juvenile crime because of the lack of financial support. God told Adam to take his woman out of his Garden. He must work to take care of her and his babies. He told him… “Adam your Garden must be your core. This is your resting place; therefore, you will know the way of man.” In the words of the Almighty, man must form his Garden through holistic measures. God told Adam to take care of home since he loved his woman more than his core. And, when Eve bares Adam’s children, make sure he provides meaningful support. Adam did. Man today must. This is the way to meaningful existence and a holistic world. Man is the strength. Woman is the moral support. _________________________/ 04/17/2014 Form: Couplet - Free Verse

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Date: 5/7/2014 12:03:00 PM
It is true all our problems sprung from the roots of that forbidden tree. Fortunately Jesus has provided a pathway back to the Garden which we will one day enjoy. Living springs of water and healing fruit and his light will be all we require.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/7/2014 12:51:00 PM
This is a visionary message Rick... Good insight... Verlena :0))s.
Date: 4/30/2014 9:22:00 PM
VERLENA, AWESOME POEM...... SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2014 7:06:00 PM
I like how you related the Adam and Eve Story to the way the world is today and what needs to happen in our world. Nice. congrats to you.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/27/2014 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Andrea for your supportive comments.... Verlena
Date: 4/26/2014 8:27:00 AM
Verlena, ,Congratulations. <3 Thank you so much for supporting my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "Dinner Date" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22220&PoetID=18720 ***Have a Nice Day*** LINDA
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Date: 4/17/2014 9:37:00 AM
Woman is the driver. Man is the wheel or is it vice versa? Just kidding! Great insight, Verlena :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/17/2014 10:27:00 AM
Really, interpretation of the word as written is magnified Toquyen... As always, thank you for your supportive remarks. Verlena :0))s,

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