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I wrote this one in response to trying to garden..I really was not able to pick and prepare those vegetables but I did anyway..
The thought came to her seeing how the spring Thaw was here with green patches of onion, And few areas of spring grasses__now green That the garden would need tending~ attention And send her forth (into the sun) to plant Vegetables, herbs, tend flowers of the hour Roses, beauties, burgundy, soft brillant Petals gentle between fingers, power Scent that allures both man, woman to come Enjoy this day in this pleasant garden That draws butterflies, which lightly touch some Drinks nectar, touches pollen, beholden Spring with its beauty, warmth, outdoor pleasures Can disregard work when one sees treasures. Contest:Poet Destroyer Sponsor:What's In Your Garden? Old Or New Meter: Iambic Pentameter Written by: Sara Kendrick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/17/2014 8:24:00 PM
You have written so beautifully about the many simple pleasures of life. I really enjoyed reading your wonderful winning poem! Congratulations to you, Sara!
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:58:00 PM
This is so sweet Sara. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/15/2014 11:07:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sara...nicely done
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:03:00 AM
I love that you involve the senses! Gives a great visual! Congratulations on your win, Sara!
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:48:00 AM
Smiling...congrats to you my dear. BG
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, sara
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Date: 5/15/2014 3:42:00 AM
so delightful great pen Sara congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/15/2014 2:02:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/26/2013 10:19:00 PM
BIG congrats here in this cool contest on metrical verse, Sara.
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:49:00 PM
Sara, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:11:00 AM
Very pretty Sara. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/20/2013 11:59:00 PM
Congrats on winning the place in the contest, Sara
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:30:00 PM
Congrats Sara: Your poems are always a joy to read. SuZ
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:45:00 PM
lovely poem sara ...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/28/2010 9:11:00 AM
Beautiful poem, enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:45:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/22/2010 1:43:00 AM
An idyll indeed Sara.Thank you for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/21/2010 8:41:00 AM
Lovely Sonnet .. so visual for the garden lover like ME... I have such a green thumb Sara and enjoy watching them all grow.. u have painted a lovely portrait in words.. see u on PP..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:39:00 PM
I can see you really love your gardening in this beautiful poem, Sara. Very nice! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:29:00 PM
I'm not much of a gardener but what a descriptive poem. Very enjoyable to read. Gareth
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Date: 3/20/2010 12:39:00 PM
Very beautiful, now I am in a state that is longing for the spring to truly come because it just snowed today. So this makes me smile and hope soon it will come.
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Date: 3/20/2010 12:02:00 PM
beautiful write here, loved the story too. Enjoy your weekend. :)
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Date: 3/20/2010 9:50:00 AM
Well the weekend is upon us and I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/20/2010 8:45:00 AM
I just realized I misspelled rambling--thanks for pointing it out. the I was looking like a L
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:07:00 AM
Sara really enjoyed reading this afternoon so good Daniel
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