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"I come to the garden alone" He is here in this quiet place "He speaks and the sound of His voice" Offers peace, hope in my space "While the dew is still on the roses" "I come to the garden alone" The bird in the tree still doses These moments with Him best known "I'd stay in the garden with Him" Though life to me is calling, tomorrow "I come to the garden alone" Again, how I want to go slow "And He tells me I am His own" His assurance is my capstone Once more on this another day "I come to the garden alone" "In The Garden" Charles A Miles, 1913

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/29/2024 2:36:00 AM

St Paul wrote: always give glory to God in whatever you do. Great poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2024 7:00:00 AM

Victor, if we could always be conscience of that and do it this would be a better world. Your comments added a special dimension. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/28/2024 3:32:00 PM

When people see the beautiful things in nature, like mountains, trees, and animals, it can make them feel connected to who made them. It's like a special bond between people and their Creator, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2024 6:59:00 AM

I totally agree with you, Lasaad. He designed it all for man's pleasure. Your visit added a special touch. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/28/2024 3:12:00 PM

I was taught that we all must ultimately 'come to the garden alone.' You've captured that beautifully...have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2024 6:58:00 AM

Yes, Sara B., I agree. In all spiritual instances we have to go it alone. Thank you for the kind review. Twas a nice evening. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/28/2024 11:15:00 AM

IS this not your poem? It is a lovely pome that flows really well and good use of the quatern form with a nice refrain.. I wrote my first every quatern today, but was for a contest with music titles..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 1:26:00 PM

Good to know you tried out the quatern, SO. They are not so easy to write but if you did not have to include lines out of a song it would be easier. Thanks for the visit. Sara K..Yes this is my poem but with lines borrowed from the song "In The Garden".

Tom Woody

Date: 1/28/2024 10:58:00 AM

Nice combination of nature and reverence. Many find a connection to their Creator while admiring his creation

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 1:25:00 PM

Yes, in nature is a great way to relate to God. Thanks for the nice review of my work with lines from another song, "In The Garden". Sara K

Eve Roper

Date: 1/28/2024 9:32:00 AM

Nicely done a prayer it sounds. Many blessings my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 10:02:00 AM

Yes, Eve a prayer that I need to pray each day. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2024 8:40:00 AM

A lovely write/pretty picture. Love It also Love "In The Garden"... FAV for me. Have a great/blessed day/week ahead..................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 10:02:00 AM

So thoughtful of you to fav this one. I appreciate the high praise. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/28/2024 8:28:00 AM

Oh, this is a beautiful quatern dear Sara.. I especially love how you've painted a vivid imagery whilst presenting insightful details about how His guidances brings light and healing for the soul.. These moments spent in peace and self-analysis are absolutely precious.. Also, love your wordplay throughout, it's so evocative.. Sending many best wishes & light your way! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 10:01:00 AM

Your visits always encourage me with their uplifting insights into my work. Love the smiley face. Sara

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/28/2024 8:19:00 AM

Sara, Lovely writing in the garden of present and tomorrows. Fine introspection in days, best wishes in your future endeavors. -Richard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 10:00:00 AM

Why, thank you, Richard. I appreciate the kind words. Yes, when I stay intune with Him, my days and life goes better. Sara K