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The Game

In the mist of affection Remained hidden the path I headed The curtain of innocence concealed your true colors Blindfolded walked the plank of love Dived into the sea of pain Dense clouds choked the flow of joy Till lifeless flesh was all that remained .. My feelings were beautiful but benefits were lame Ultimately became a sacrifice in your game I perished in the chase Of putting an everlasting smile on your face...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2016 11:13:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, Angad, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 9:46:00 PM
hope to see you active again
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:20:00 PM
Angad, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:37:00 AM
liked the portrayal and enjoyed reading your write.
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:01:00 AM
Expression of a broken heart. Its one thing we've all experienced. Nice one
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Date: 5/2/2013 9:10:00 PM
about your poem: I like the game, and the fun feeling of falling in love in these conditions... enjoyed your first poem...~ LINDA
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Date: 5/2/2013 9:08:00 PM
Angad,, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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