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The Fraud Molded Soul

An old friend made it like blossom in my soul, All I was feeling was blood rush in the deep core. It wasn’t just friendship that brought two of us so close, We were hoping for so much more leaving behind the sore. All i could understand about her, was the angelic nature she hold, But who knew, it was just the double heart she had mold. The way she uncovered herself to me was all I knew, But the molded heart opened up to me like rotten stew. I never thought, it would turn up to me like this, For all i just was waiting for the little bliss. The world pretended to me like gratifying & liberated, But it ended up the other way which I had most hated. All she possessed was the "Nature fake", And I felt like washing my hands in the dirty lake. On every step she just tried to prove me wrong, With all this I knew it’s not going to go too long. From all this I have learned a lesson to remember, Trust only those, who have heart like divine messenger. Just turn out to this world, the way you are, Because later on it just gonna left like a dirty scar. -By (Gautam) Dated on – 20th Dec 2014

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Date: 10/30/2015 11:47:00 AM
wow!!!!Gautam! how true the words are! heart wrenching feel ...... when some people play with others' life and emotions like toys and move away remorseless breaching all trust....i pray that time heals even the scars and fill true and fresh love in the heart which has suffered.....a 7!.......Love, Anu:)
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Mr Gautam
Date: 10/30/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot for you kind words Anu....Time heals everything. ^^ I hope you liked my work. Looking forward to read more of your poems.
Date: 10/30/2015 5:21:00 AM
This poem goes for relationships and friendships too..So many friends so few to trust. Wise message in your poem.
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Mr Gautam
Date: 10/30/2015 12:54:00 PM
Yeah that's what i was intending to portray from my words..Thanks for your appreciation.^^
Date: 10/29/2015 4:36:00 AM
I'm sorry you were hurt by someone who wore an emotional mask. Being deceived by someone we love causes a wound that does not heal quickly. Welcome to the soup, Gautam. ~ LLin ~
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2015 4:51:00 AM
I liked it very much. I also trusted such a person, but if we don't learn from our mistakes we'll continue to make the same ones.
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Mr Gautam
Date: 10/29/2015 4:43:00 AM
That's what we call it a life.....We need to be beware of such people. Trusting someone easily was my mistake. But now i have started learning from my mistakes. Anyways thanks for reading it..i hope you would have liked it. ^^
Date: 10/26/2015 7:44:00 AM
A very sad truth. The fake face that some wear still blows my mind. When I have an encounter, such as this again, because I know I will... It will once again shock me and break my heart.
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Mr Gautam
Date: 10/26/2015 8:17:00 AM
Hmm that sounds bad....you should be more selective in sticking by someone. May be you have thin ears and you trust people easily....and which may later on leads to breach of trust. That thing hurts.......wish you a wonderful life ahead. Keep Smiling.... ^^

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