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The Fragrance

The dawn is fragrant with a ruby rose, the sunset smells as somnolent as blue night violets... In fragrance they compose its head and tail but heart belongs to you. An intricate experimental prose (not actually popular), a new ambiguous poetry... These two compose my blood and flesh but soul belongs to you. An everlasting transience I chose, a wanderlust, a hatred for a queue and noisy neighbors... All of them compose my worthless life but death belongs to you. This weird sonnet came along due to no longer I belong to you.

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Alkas Poetry

Date: 5/19/2019 5:08:00 AM

I am really fond of sonnets and you Kurt you got it magically done, salute alkas

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/19/2019 6:19:00 AM

Muito obrigado, Alkas. É bom ouvir as palavras agradáveis de um poeta tão bom como você. Rays of respect)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/21/2019 2:53:00 AM

Beautifully done, Kurt. Bravo!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/21/2019 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Caren. Your bravo is worth a lot to me)

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/19/2019 11:58:00 AM

Smell of Life seeks its own* were mists of sweet hope grown* waves of wisdom thus bound* majestic beauty found* under heart's high castle* and on truth's waiting bridge* seeds cast at heartbreak ridge* smell of Life seeks its own* Superb sonnet you have given birth to.. A fav..

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/21/2019 9:04:00 AM

That's how it looks like when the comment is better than what it comments) Thank you, Robert.