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The Four Walls of Darkness

The Four Walls of Darkness Darkness envelopes the reaching hand in front of me, it is gone as I am gone, Captured, barricaded, tortured day and night within these four evil walls... My Hell, this 10x10 room without a view, with nothing to do but wait, and wait again, Waiting for sanity to lose it's grip, waiting for reality to slip, wait, and wait again... The only comfort for me are these four walls I can't see, in darkness surrounding me, Haunting me, taunting me , Laughing at me, my only company, four walls of bad company... It's so very dark here, I must be dying, finally, I can't seem to feel anything, nothing, like there are no walls in front of me, but where did my prison go, suddenly...bright light!! Eyes opening to a different room, steel walls, antiseptic odor covering, something, four new shiny walls surrounding me, but still torturing, all around me dead bodies... Visiting the morgue before they bury me inside the four walls of my casket...Bastards!!! Bmdavey@02/19/16 Poem written for contest 4 walls creative free verse sponsored by C.J.

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Date: 3/13/2016 9:06:00 AM
Hey Brian, Dark and gloomy--but even with that mood set I was not ready for the super-creepy twist at the end! Like a classic Tales of the Crypt comic--in other words, awesome write, man! Cheers, Brian
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/13/2016 3:08:00 PM
thank you Brian I had fun with this write and I don't even think I was ready for the twist at the end either...lol
Date: 3/11/2016 11:27:00 AM
Congrats on the dark win Brian...god bless...^WW^
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/12/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank you WW
Date: 3/11/2016 10:21:00 AM
Hi Brian, Congratulations on your "4 walls" win.... Love LINDA
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/12/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank.you Linda nice to.see you in the soup again
Date: 3/11/2016 10:13:00 AM
thank you
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/12/2016 5:48:00 AM
No thank you CJ I enjoyed the theme in your contest
Date: 2/20/2016 9:46:00 PM
Now this is my kind of poetry! I think I am gonna print it and frame to put on my wall. Can't wait to read more.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/21/2016 3:51:00 AM
Wow that would be cool my poem would be like decoration and inspiration!!

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