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The Four Seasons

The Four Seasons… It was spring and I was young when I had wine. I was singing and dancing and doing fine. The wine was so divine, made my blossoms glow. The spring is for the youth, makes everything shine. Summer came and I was older, full of joy. I was in love, and love taught me to enjoy. I was flying, kissing, dancing having fun. Didn't know that the end is there to destroy. The autumn was yellow, tired, full of pain. My garden was there but flowers lived in vain. The nightingales departed, my youth as well. I could not see the way, clouds were crying rain. Now is winter and winter promises cold. I am there but alone, with no one to hold. The garden is barren, empty, no more youth. The only thing is there, is me that is old. 10/24/18 Haloo This poem is in the form of "Rubaiyat", it is the plural form of Rubai. Rubai is a quatrain with rhyming of AABA. Each Rubai is a book by itself, it starts and ends within the quatrain, but when it's in a form of Rubaiyat, it follows the single theme with the same meter throughout. Poetrysoup has a good explanation of this format.

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Date: 2/4/2022 7:29:00 PM
Wonderful piece Pashang, loved how you related your feelings to the environment.Hope you are happy...
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Date: 4/10/2019 4:25:00 PM
A very insightful verse, Pashang! My kind of poetry! Many thanks for your kind comment re Cat Hairs. In fact my so-called short-haired cat Jeff is snoozing on my desk as I type this! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - BoB
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Date: 12/3/2018 10:27:00 AM
It was a joy while walking from the park of your seasons. Always.,
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/3/2018 10:30:00 AM
You're welcome anytime my dear.
Date: 11/9/2018 8:22:00 AM
This is so beautifully done, Pashang, you are a master of Rubaiyat:)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/26/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, you are so kind.
Date: 11/8/2018 6:47:00 PM
hello Pashang, I like this poem it has a rhythmic sound when I read it. have a nice evening my friend.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/26/2018 1:08:00 AM
Thank you Darlene.
Date: 11/7/2018 2:34:00 PM
A poetic journey through the seasons of life. I'm hoping I'm still in the autumn of my life Pashang, the thoughts of my winter and being alone is not something I relish. Adding this gem to my faves, hope you have a new picture soon I think one for this particular poem would be awesome:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2018 4:04:00 PM
This is a remarkable poem, Pashang, a fav.
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Date: 10/30/2018 6:08:00 AM
it was young times and wine times and life was good and full of energy, The tree has many roots and the memory many a photo snap remembrance. I love your poem Pashang, Have a wonderful day . Thank you for you visit,
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Pixie, you're so wonderful.
Date: 10/30/2018 12:04:00 AM
Excellent and great imagery. Nicely penned. Enjoyed reading it
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Ravi, you are too kind.
Date: 10/29/2018 4:21:00 PM
Yeah.. I have a crush on your incredible pen!!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:45:00 PM
You are tooooooo nice my friend.
Date: 10/29/2018 2:07:00 PM
Well rendered my friend...plus you're never too old...think young at heart lol...love & light...^WW^
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:45:00 PM
Thanks WW, number wise I might not be old, but down inside, I'm ancient.
Date: 10/28/2018 11:07:00 AM
Nicely done. There was a jump from Stanza two to stanza four. I would have liked to have heard more about the fun before the bad stuff started, but as you point out, we often realize that too late.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thanks, Duke. 4 seasons, 4 Rubayis.
Date: 10/28/2018 2:00:00 AM
yes, many have written the seasons of their life. Sorry if you truly are in winter now. i think I am in early fall. HOpefully not closer than that to winter. I loved this one. I can so relate to it!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:42:00 PM
Early fall is beautiful, so as you Andrea.
Date: 10/27/2018 8:26:00 AM
You are so good at these forms, Pashang. You have tackled each season from the point of view of a man who has experienced all facets of life. // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Paul... I had my shares.
Date: 10/27/2018 3:51:00 AM
Every season has its magic and Beauty! A long journey we go through, there are gains and with every loss and pain there is another carved gain with another value and taste.. I can't objectively relate to the winter season because I am in the autumn one! Now, I adore and venerate what I am going through. A captivating and unique write.. Masterfully expressed! Into my fave list because I like your poetry. My deepest regards Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/4/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Besma... wait for a little longer... winter is inevitable.
Date: 10/27/2018 12:53:00 AM
Hi Pashang, the four seasons, each one shining in its own right when written off by your golden pen. Your beautiful words flow, playing the heartstrings of the reader. Your words paint strong and beautiful imagery., The seasons of a life painted with skill, deep and meaningful. A Fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/29/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Mike, you're a good friend.
Date: 10/25/2018 6:37:00 AM
Life intertwined with four seasons. A well written poem, Pasang. Meaningful..enjoyed reading it.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/26/2018 5:58:00 PM
You are too kind Vijay. You are always welcome.
Date: 10/25/2018 5:54:00 AM
This has great imagery, you are great at these old Persian forms...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/26/2018 5:57:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 10/25/2018 3:43:00 AM
- A spring of joy, a summer of love, a fall so sad, a winter ... dark, long and cold with lonely thoughts - A wonderful poem, Pashang - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/26/2018 5:56:00 PM
My dear Anne Lise, you are so kind. Thank you.

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