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The Forgotten Gifts

She sat in her little cottage Her ears tuned Her body alive Waiting… Waiting for that knock on the door Anytime now She pulled back the frilly curtains And peered out at the gathering dusk The time when most of her visitors Would knock at her door Looking for word gifts To fill up their souls It was the third day… It was the third night… And she kept her vigil With her candle lit To ward off the loneliness That was creeping in on her She fought it away Repositioning the candle To make sure that its light Would be a welcome sight To her longed for visitors Only one thing worried her What would she offer them as presents? She had nothing to give And this was the custom In these parts The tradition The giving and getting of word presents That's why she had moved here She fondly fingered on of the presents Given to her By one of her most cherished visitors A token of love and friendship Of constancy And yet…. Where was he? Now when she was destitute Now when she was dry With no gifts to offer She had been forgotten by them all Forgotten by him She fought back the tears Willing to believe The candle flickered and died out The moonlight Filtered in through her window Comforting her with its magical Dream formations On her wooden floor She sighed She had given all that she had Did they love her only for her gifts? Could they not just reopen her gifts and look inside? If not that…what about the other unopened ones The older ones The ones that she had shyly left Outside their doors When she had newly moved in And was yet unknown Once one of them had opened a gift The news had spread That there was someone new in the area With word gifts to give Some were crude But others were beautiful With her own distinctive design All wrapped with her love Each scented by her perfume Her signature scent Now she was poor No gifts No perfume No words Empty.... Why didn't they come to visit? Why didn't they open the ones of long ago That still lay around their homes…unopened She brushed away a tear Perhaps she’d been forgotten Perhaps she just wasn’t good enough For this part of the country She decided On the morrow She would leave Though it would make her heart bleed But wait… A faint knock on the door A familiar knock She sprang to her feet And swung upon the door There he stood A smile on his face “I haven’t seen you for a while Your gifts used to bring me a smile Sorry it’s late I just couldn't wait To tell you… I found the unopened gift It still bore your scent It reminded me of you The beauty of your soul And how you make me whole Here I am… Here I am to tell you I’ve missed your gifts But more than that… I’ve missed the giver!” With tears streaming down But a smile on her face She took his hand And led him inside The home of her heart For a nice long sweet visit With one of her favorite Giver of gifts! Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/1/2015 7:53:00 AM
The last few days I have been asking myself these same questions. This captures the emotions very well.
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:54:00 AM
Before I got to the end of the poem, I know the treasured gift was you! And how appropriate--the finest you could give!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/11/2014 9:13:00 PM
Thank you for the endearing post. I brought me joy. You are very sweet.
Date: 6/23/2013 4:30:00 PM
Very beautifully written!
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Date: 6/16/2013 6:49:00 PM
Eileen, You are giving a gift of words by writing about everyone who writes their soul and posts on a website, hoping to give as well as receive. A very hopeful and heartwarming story. :)
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:32:00 PM
Very interesting and descriptive one. Sweet words are gifts always because it is not possible to evaluate with money. Generally we are attracted to new one but who remembers the old is a nice guy. Loved done. Loved always, bl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/9/2013 10:26:00 AM
Yes....words are more treasured than monetary gifts! My daughter wrote a poem for my birthday which I treasure more than any gift she could have possibly given me! Thanks for the visit. :)
Date: 6/5/2013 12:31:00 PM
VERY interesting analogy, Eileen! Please keep the word gifts coming ;) They brighten days and stimulate minds. Adding this one to my faves :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/5/2013 1:33:00 PM
Hi sweetie! So nice of you to visit! Hope all is well....Your word gifts are fabulous as well! :) Hugs!
Date: 6/3/2013 8:24:00 AM
This is too interesting, Eileen...and a little mysterious! Your gift of words here is a lovely thing.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2013 8:59:00 AM
Wow...interesting and mysterious! Never thought of those two adjectives in connection with this...but me likes! :) Your gifts are much appreciated! Hugs!
Date: 6/1/2013 3:33:00 PM
wow Eileen you have just blown me away,,, this is one poem to read over and over again and i will.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2013 8:57:00 AM
Harry dear! So lovely to hear from you! I've missed ya! Thanks for this lovely compliment!
Date: 6/1/2013 2:00:00 PM
Hi Eileen very nice narrative. You are extremly talented
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 2:02:00 PM
Thanks, Christine! Sweet of you to say that! :)
Date: 6/1/2013 12:12:00 PM
Wow! Wow! "Word Giver" You certainly nailed it with this piece. Kim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 12:14:00 PM
Thanks, Kim! :) I'm glowing with this praise!
Date: 6/1/2013 8:34:00 AM
You don't get much more uplifting than this. THIS is what I'm talking about! :) Fantastic!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:29:00 AM
Drake, you are too kind! Thanks for this lovely post. Gives me a boost.
Date: 6/1/2013 12:38:00 AM
What an analogy for life! Word gifts... what could be better? Like your own on thunder storms this story took me on a trip that I didn't know where I was going, but left me feeling satisfied and enlightened in the end... fantastic!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:30:00 AM
Oh...Timothy! I'm so glad to know that. Thank you for visiting. I know this isn't quite your genre, but you visit nonetheless. You are a visitor who is always welcome!
Date: 5/31/2013 10:00:00 PM
wow x 1000, amazing!!!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:35:00 AM
Arthur...how kind and gracious of you! :) Thanks...a poet of your caliber to like my work is truly a compliment.
Date: 5/31/2013 9:33:00 PM
Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow What a fantastic poem! Favorite all the way!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:36:00 AM
Richard!!!!! Richard!!! Richard!!! Thanks! :) What an honor to be faved by one of my fav poets! :)
Date: 5/31/2013 6:54:00 PM
You are a word giver Eileen, everytime I open one of your writes I consider it a gift. You have lots knocking on your door :) Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:37:00 AM
Richard, your poem, Hurricane Eileen was one of the best gifts I have ever received. Thanks ever so much for that. I treasure it. Please...visit often! You are always welcome!
Date: 5/31/2013 6:13:00 PM
I just love happy endings!!!!!thank you.....:-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:38:00 AM
Me too MD! Life has enough sorry and things going wrong...at least we can have happy endings in what we write! ;) Love ya!
Date: 5/31/2013 5:56:00 PM
Such a beautiful analogy, Dear Eileen ....and a prompt to go back a few pages on all the poet's pages here. I do consider your poems a word gift as I do all of the friends I am making here....their poems. Love, SuZ
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:39:00 AM
Yes, SuZ...when someone I really like hasn't posted for a bit, I do go back and read some of the older writes to reconnect! It isn't so much that the writer has evolved, it's just that we appreciate the work more because we know them better! Thanks for the visit!
Date: 5/31/2013 1:47:00 PM
What a beautiful ending, Eileen. You rock, girlfriend. Licia :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:42:00 AM
YOU DO TOO, GIRLFRIEND! Heading over your way to check out your new poem?
Date: 5/31/2013 12:55:00 PM
Wow begins emotive pensive but ends up being more than just dat. U r a talentd poet n dis was a great epic i enjoyd readin. Kudos pal.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 11:46:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for your visit! I enjoy visits a great deal...:) They make me smile!

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