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the forest


I walked through the forest of beautiful tall trees
And felt the softness of a gentle breeze
I saw a rabbit running by, as I looked up to the sky
There was a squirrel jumping from tree to tree
Landing on the branches so gracefully.

I heard the crickets making their beautiful sound
But there was none that could be found.
I could hear a woodpecker pecking away
But I knew it was far away.

I heard the shrill of the crows in flight
But the trees covered them from my sight
I heard the sound of a running brook
As I searched to take a look.

The forest with all its sights
Made my heart jump with delight
All the beauties that GOD has given
Is in this forest where his creatures are living.

I found the brook which was clear as glass
And the fish jumping- creating a splash
The suns reflection on the water
like sparkling diamonds in the brook
as I got closer to take a look. 

If and when time permits 
Go to the forest - take a trip
Look at all that GOD has given
This is what makes life worth living.


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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Louis. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol

    rams Avatar louis rams
    Date: 9/7/2012 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    as always thank you for your comment and encouragement
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:25:00 PM
    Beautiful poem penned Louis enjoyed the walk through nature with you, hugs vie

    rams Avatar louis rams
    Date: 9/7/2012 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i am honored that you have walked with me
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:53:00 PM
    Love this softly expressed poetry. Very nice evening read as I am winding down from a busy day. Thanks, Cindy

    rams Avatar louis rams
    Date: 9/7/2012 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hoping this helped you to unwind