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The Forecast

The cold bitter nights trying to break me, Trying to destroy me or it so it seems to be. But my heart and spirit is full of so much heat That the coldest breeze couldn't even compete. That power of desire Lit with fire Will always keep me warm. Even through the thunderstorm, I know I'm going to get hit with the worst Where if I even touch it , it will burst. But with my strength as one people, I could beat it without even trying. You can't stop this one. Don't even think you have won. You make it rain, hail, snow, I don't care. I'll just win by blowing hot air. Let's just say I outdo the forecast Because I'll shine no matter how it slash. Just in case you didn't know When I shine, I told you so.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/24/2015 6:31:00 PM
Hi DonCrita, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:54:00 PM
Doncrita, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Doncrita Shelton
Date: 7/24/2015 8:15:00 AM
THank you very much for the warm welcome.
Date: 7/23/2015 5:57:00 PM
This is really good! Can't wait to read other poems by you. -God Bless Aidan
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Doncrita Shelton
Date: 7/24/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thanks ! I will definitely be writing more!

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