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The Flush of Living

My basket lifts from ground; I, eager, stand inside it as I drift into blue air. I see below - the slowly shrinking land, above my head, a giant yellow pear. She takes me high, and as I’m looking down, I view the checkered rows of each green lawn around the center of my little town and tiny houses. . . Soon they all are gone. I breathe the clouds. . . then happiness-immersed, I skim tall mountain peaks; I’m sailing wind. And if my big balloon should tear or burst, my soul will not forget. Death can’t rescind the flush of living. My! What fills the sky? A flock of snow white geese comes rushing by. For Brian Strand's YOUR PICK any theme/form max 14 lines Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/19/2020 10:16:00 PM
Enjoyable sonnet of riding in an air balloon. "The flush of living" is an apt title for an adventuresome spirit!
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Date: 10/23/2011 11:17:00 AM
Awesome write!! congratulations on your win!!---Lori
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Date: 10/21/2011 8:43:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a top ten win in Brian's contest with this elegant poetry truly awesome my friend... so happy PS is back up and running so great ...wow..
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:00:00 PM
Thank you for taking us on such a marvelous trip Andrea. In sonnets you excel. congrats...Luv Margaret
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Date: 10/21/2011 2:02:00 PM
A beautiful, picturesque poem! congrats on your win, Andrea! So glad PS is up again. I've been having withdrawals. I've missed all my new friends.
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Date: 10/21/2011 2:00:00 PM
A beautiful, picturesque poem! congrats on your win, Andrea! So glad PS is up again. I've been having withdrawals. I've missed all my new friends.
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Date: 10/21/2011 8:53:00 AM
Beautiful Andrea. I could live it. I could see it. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Pick" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:42:00 AM
What a lovely verse, so filled with the magic of a balloon ride. I felt as if I were floating with your!
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Date: 8/3/2011 1:11:00 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 7/29/2011 5:58:00 PM
Andrea, I love the picture this poem paints. Mike
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Date: 7/29/2011 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! Hope it puts a smile on your face today :)
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Date: 7/29/2011 3:38:00 PM
I was right up there with you... great poem. So descriptive and creative. Lee
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your HM...lovely poem.
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:47:00 PM
Beautiful. Many congratulations, Andrea : )
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest, Andrea! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/29/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Andrea. Beautiful Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comment on my recent win. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/29/2011 8:52:00 AM
This is number one in my book and going to my fav's. thanks for up-lifting me and taking me away, Andrea. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/29/2011 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in Francine's "Balloon" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:43:00 PM
This is charming. Makes me want to go for a balloon ride. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:35:00 PM
"I breathe the clouds". What a smart line. But, we do expect that from you!! Congratulations! RAY
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:06:00 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest Andrea with this great entry
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:58:00 PM
Congrats on your HM Andrea with this lovely creative poetry in balloon contest my friend... up up and away we go ...flying high..luv..enjoy honor..
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:48:00 PM
Triumphant soaring of the flight of soul.
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Date: 7/24/2011 6:15:00 AM
I grew up in a town outside of Cincy, Ohio where the Balloon Fest Nationals were held annually. Girl I miss the beautiful views of, and from the hot air balloons! When a poem strikes up a great memory, to me it's done it's job! I am so fortunate to have a connection with you. Your passion for poetry is amazing. I have decided to release a small book of poetry at the beginning of next year year.(though the poems will be very different from the ones I put on here)
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