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The Flu Enveloped Me

I started the day wholly fresh and free Allowing this flu to envelope me I sparked a fever Puked up a beaver Waiting for the day I’ll heal so fully Russell Sivey Entrant into ~Gwendolen~'s "The Sneezing Limerick Contest"

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Debra Squyres

Date: 12/29/2011 5:29:00 PM

ohhhh myyy!! The throwing up is the worst !! Best of luck in the contest !! A beaver??? lol

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/28/2011 9:14:00 PM

Gwendolen should like this one. It looks good to me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2011 1:50:00 PM

Influenza is a bad bedfellow..When one gets it, they are wiped out and in the bed..I hope that you are now well..Reads like a winner to me.Thanks for the kind review of my work about the Red-Tips and yes, they will be remembered by me as something that the children did that I really appreciated...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2011 12:39:00 PM

Bless you Russell OXOX not hugging today Anne-Lise