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The Flower Head

The Flower Head I see a flower floating down the middle of the stream It causes me to stop in my walk. Why a flower floating alone, what a strange scene The petals all tight, just the flower head, and no stalk. Did it drop or was it cast just, like the proverbial bread? It bobbed up and down disappeared and then returned I saw some petals had separated from the head. They started to drift from the flower as it churned. And the gap grew wider and wider Soon it was so wide it couldn’t be closed, the water a real divider. It made me think was it me as the flower head spun in the stream Was I the head were my petals my friends? We stick together through life’s rich pattern and schemes I watch for a while but the stream bends When the going gets tough and the water gets rough Some petals break away and drift off But some stick on the head and the water they tread They will stick with the head, and at life’s troubles they scoff.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/12/2013 10:39:00 AM
How the hell did i miss this one, we talk of psychological aspects in our lives, and your poetry is truly in harmony with all of that,,, this is amazing poetry Mandy... a personification in poetry, no one does it better than you,,, your intelligence is mind boggling ... oh and i just love this poem...
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Date: 12/5/2012 12:12:00 PM
Dear Mandy, I know I read this yesterday but I don't know why I did not comment. Anyway I think this is one of YOUR best works so far,the petals staying with the flower head being YOUR Everlasting Friends. I am the one on the bottom (I hope) LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/5/2012 12:14:00 PM
Mandy, Sorry about the double it said my code was wrong...Harry
Date: 12/5/2012 12:11:00 PM
Dear Mandy, I know I read this yesterday but I don't know why I did not comment. Anyway I think this is one of YOUR best works so far,the petals staying with the flower head being YOUR Everlasting Friends. I am the one on the bottom (I hope) LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/9/2011 8:36:00 PM
A beautiful poem with brilliant end,Mandy.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/10/2011 3:55:00 AM
Why thankyou Fabiyas, much appreciated x
Date: 12/9/2011 10:26:00 AM
that stalwart flower head must just keep moving on and being strong! An interesting analogy poem, Mandy.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/10/2011 3:55:00 AM
Thanks Andrea x
Date: 12/9/2011 8:36:00 AM
Oh my Mandy the words are flowing onto the paper today for you aren't they.. Love this one. Love, Carol
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/9/2011 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Carol x
Date: 12/9/2011 7:16:00 AM
You have placed the reader right in this scene.. so much comes from this Piece.. and leaves the reader on the same ride as the flower... very much enjoy your talent today.... xoox Michael
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/9/2011 9:03:00 AM
thanks Michael, lovely comment x
Date: 12/9/2011 4:54:00 AM
Are u walkin on a tight rope in your Avatar? I can't tell....hmmmmm. curious.
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Date: 12/9/2011 4:58:00 AM
Parachute.x

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