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The Flower

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The Flower

a downcast face
stares at the curlicues
forming symbols
he loves me petals
grow upon the flower

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:33:00 PM
    How sweet...Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:40:00 AM
    I noticed this poem a few days ago Debbie, And I was quite taken by its flow.. Also the unique way you have expressed yourself with wording I consider this nothing short of brilliant..! Also Thank you for your kind words on my last poem Yours Joe..)

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 6:52:00 PM
    Great Tanka!! Perfection my dear Debbie. xoxox Michael

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:52:00 AM
    The Flower - is a good tanka. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:49:00 AM
    He loves me not, i always got that one, when my fav aunt, use to pull off the petals, but she always cheated so i would get 'she love me' wow i digress, from your awesome Tanka, glad i came....

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 3:29:00 AM
    Lovely write here Debbie. A tanka well penned.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 11:49:00 AM
    A poem I like very much, lovely. - Have a beautiful weekend Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:12:00 AM
    Debbie great image, ...David

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:08:00 PM
    ‡ This Is Beautiful, But Even More Amazing And Beautiful Is The Sudden Emotions That Rise From Nowhere To Deeply Stir Inside Ones Veins At The Sight Of Another, Beautiful Debbie. I Love Heart I Find Inside These Lines; Stirring, To Love Anothers Priceless Heart. I Am Going Fave This Beautiful Poetic Jewel. Love, Rachel ‡