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The Flirt

She whispers in his ear it's not what he expects to hear he turns to see this voice there's a twinkle in her eye at the sight of his surprise she finds it sweet that he's embarrassed and a little shy he's nervous but gently gives a reply he stutters a bit but asks her to sit. As they chat her fingers find her wavy hair he starts to relax by making her laugh and then he starts to stare. She brushes his arm one soft touch and starts to stare just as much. Like old lovers these two on a blind date fresh and new He whispers in her ear something she wasn't expecting to hear turns out they are quite the pair red hot chemistry in the air. 7/14/15

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Date: 7/22/2015 2:42:00 AM
Wonderful write n win Lee, congrats!
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:19:00 AM
Hi Lee, Congratulations on a well deserved win. Nice suspenseful build up and meaning to your creation. Good job. Earl
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win Siz
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:47:00 PM
I bet this is based on your own personal army of flirtacious weapons, Lee. Lovely, soft, intimate write. Congratulations, Viv x
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:32:00 AM
Lol... My "army of flirtatious weapons " love your words viv! Thank you!
Date: 7/20/2015 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this wonderful write 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:27:00 AM
BW thank you : )
Date: 7/20/2015 3:36:00 PM
Have to hand it to you, Lee. Congrats for winning in Casarah's contest! I myself didn't get to join this. hugs!
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:26:00 AM
Kim it was a fun contest ... Sorry you missed it thanks for your support!
Date: 7/20/2015 2:34:00 PM
Lee, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Skat!
Date: 7/20/2015 2:11:00 PM
lovely and flirtatious many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan!
Date: 7/20/2015 1:52:00 PM
This made me smile, Nicely done :)
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:23:00 AM
Thank you casarah!
Date: 7/16/2015 7:49:00 AM
Oh please carry on, this is very visual, an excellent poem..
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Harry for your support!
Date: 7/15/2015 8:25:00 PM
Lee, love the repeating line ;) it really does the flirt!! cute!!!~Olive Eloisa =")!
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:22:00 AM
Thank you olive for reading!
Date: 7/15/2015 3:13:00 PM
this is a really great description of a couple first getting to know each other with flirtation. Very well done.
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Andrea : )
Date: 7/15/2015 1:50:00 PM
Your words rise to the moment Lee, loving the hot moment.... LINDA
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 7:20:00 AM
Thank you linda!
Date: 7/15/2015 10:12:00 AM
Lee, you've got the come-on scene down pat! Janice
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/15/2015 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Janice ... Doesn't always happen in real life lol!
Date: 7/15/2015 7:53:00 AM
Lee, enchanting 7, flirty and sexy and thanks for visiting my poem, shame. . .
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/15/2015 11:53:00 AM
Thank you BW! : )

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