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The Flight of the Moonbee

(Hey, Moonbee! Wait up!...) You're visiting friends on Titan I hear? My starship's broke down (In the shop I fear) Wow...SATURN'S a long FLIGHT Hitch a ride? Well ALRIGHT! Could you drop me off at the moon, my dear?

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Donna Golden

Date: 11/22/2009 11:13:00 PM

:o) Delightful piece, Tim! Lucky MoonBee! I'll just catch a ride on the afterburn, I guess!Hugs, Donna

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/22/2009 2:43:00 PM

so sweet! Light & Love

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/22/2009 1:55:00 PM

Timmy, (LOL) Boy... Now, You Know, If I Fly You To The Moon... You'll Have To Dance With Me Among The Stars! (God, Who Sings That One? I Forgot (smile) ... But I'll Be Singing Yours For Sure ... Love It Timmy, Just Love It! Oh and On This Flight, We'll Be Drinking Cosmos, White-Lightning and the Ever Favorite of Mine ... "MoonShine" hehehehe Ha!... Poet-Gal-Pal ... MoonBee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/22/2009 7:38:00 AM

Such a creative poem and MoonBee is a delightful poet.. nice tribute to her from your creative pen... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" Is there another flight leaving soon?

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/21/2009 11:11:00 PM

fun tribute to a fine souper! Tim!!! jimbo

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 11/21/2009 2:31:00 PM

this is a fun poem! I must look up this Moonbee!

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/21/2009 2:11:00 PM

Oh! I had no idea there is a writer named MoonBee! How fun! I'll have to run and visit as this is such a wonderful tribute! Tim, I thought you were headed to the moon with a honeybee or something! lol! Back to read more later. Off to work now. :)

Date: 11/21/2009 1:34:00 PM

Moonbee will enjoy this. What a wonderful tribute. Has me smiling. Thank you for sharing this day brightener with us. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 11:03:00 AM

Great write in honor of a great poet. Moonbee will love this, Tim. Great tempo and a creative, astral expedition in this poem! I hope you are enjoying your weekend. All aboard! Love you, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/21/2009 9:58:00 AM

Tim! Hey it's me! Tuned up the scooter at the Automezzi so we're all set! I got a spot in the custom front seat! Grab a cup of coffee... some tunes maybe and we'll be on our way. :) Saturn IS a long dayz... drive. I might just decide to hang at the moon with you a while... you mind? ;) I love this little write of yours, dear and appreciate your kind comments very much!